Reviews for Playing (Un)Fairly |
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TheDaxter11 chapter 2 . 11/24/2016 oh god please continue this! ive been laughing like mad at whats going on and i love it- i hope you pick it back up since its been two years since youve updated it |
4277333 chapter 2 . 4/13/2015 Really chill and feel good. Writing fits this mood well. Premise is absolutely perfect. Seriously, perfect. I really do hope you find the time and/or inspiration to continue. It would be a shame for such a story to stand in indefinite hiatus. |
Mr. X chapter 2 . 12/17/2014 Yo need to post chapter 3! |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/21/2014 love this so far,, cant wait for rule 3! |
Kelpy chapter 2 . 10/10/2014 Bless your humor so much. It's sorta clear that you were running on little sleep because of how random it is, but it actually works well because your writing is so casual and it makes it seem almost natural? Like, this is probably the strangest results this jealousy game has ever seen but you make it work so flawlessly, haha. This chapter was super engaging, though; the pace was varied and the fast points were so so thrilling. And you have little quirks in your writing (probably what makes your writing seem casual to me) and you just have such a unique tone and ug h do I even need to mention your characterization for the quartet? It's so so good. Keep up your excellent work, Hacq! |
Sayu chapter 2 . 9/17/2014 What just happened . . .? Pfft . . . Poor Haruka is scared to death right now, and Ayano isn't making it any better. I wonder what they're all going to do next; well that's for next chapter. Keep up the great work! |
secret-san chapter 1 . 9/1/2014 AYANO PFFFFTTTTTTTT I'M DYING OF LAUGHTER All your fics are hilarious, keep on trucking! vO |
ly-da-dinosaur chapter 2 . 8/31/2014 On dear god that was awesome. Can't wait for the next update *:.。. o()o .。.:* |
Iamthecookieninja chapter 2 . 8/31/2014 Dammit, this is so good. The plot is so unique, and I'm wondering what Ayano means by "stepping up a notch". Can't wait for the next chapter! |
Cairin chapter 2 . 8/26/2014 Oh my god. OH MY GOD. This is the best damn thing I've seen in so long. I have no other words. |
Cairin chapter 1 . 8/26/2014 This cracked up a lot of smiles from me. I like how Takane was acting slightly Ene in this one, with her enthusiasm while trying to convince Shintaro and all. And Shintaro, you hypocrite, after putting up such a fight, you'll be the one saving the plan in the end. I bet if his NEET self played the ''jealousy game''...I don't even want to think about it. I enjoyed your writing because it didn't feature just one character's perspective and emotions. You sure used the third person POV to your advantage. Great job! I'm sure the next chapters will be just as good. |
Shiawase Day chapter 2 . 8/23/2014 Hhahah The continue, please! |
unknown chapter 2 . 8/22/2014 Ayano just wants to take all of Shintaro's first times...handholding or not. |
Anonymous chapter 2 . 8/21/2014 OMG THIS IS AWESOME! I LOVE THE SHINTAKA AND HARUAYA YES MORE PLS |
MidnightReader chapter 2 . 8/21/2014 This is seriously the funniest thing I've read in long time. I was laughing so hard. Haruka and Ayano are such a hilarious akward pair ("Yay..?" "I think..?" "Yay." "Okay.") and it's great since there are not a lot of stories with them interacting enough. I feel so much pity - So. Much. Pity. For Haruka and Shintaro. The poor guys. Anyways, get more sleep (even though you did so well with out it) and I hope you continue this! It really makes my day! |