Please update

Can you please make another a kid from the future chapter and who is the mother of gohan's son

Name: Jasmine Marsh

Hair: black, waist length

Age: 10

Gender: female

Side (Human or Elf): Elf

Clothing (Armor): blue t-shirt, black pants with a black cloak and black shoes. She had padding under the cloak as well for protection.

(Also r u still adding my OC into this story?)

Good to see you back buddy! Hey life and stuff can get the most of us but look-y here! You done and came back! Congrats! Nice chapter to come back to.

Make the next chapter for the kid from the future in dbz and name the boy gohan jr

My South Park OC for this book:
Name:Blueberry Smith
Eye color:Brown
Gender:Female
Birthday:Decemeber 28
Age:9
Personality:Tomboyish, friendly, kind, optimistic, and helpful
Looks:Blue chullo hat with cat ears, blue parka hoodie, grey pants, and black shoes
Stick of Truth(Outfit):She's in Fighter class so she'll wear a icy blue cloak, white sweater, black leggings, and silver boots also wears a silver blue chullpo hat that'll resemble a helmet but with cat ears. She'll carry around a shield and a dagger
Friends:Stan, Kyle, Cartman, Kenny(Best friends), Butters, Craig, Clyde, Token, Jimmy, Tweek, and all the boys at school
Enemies:Trent, Shelly, Wendy and her friends, and bullies
Likes:Video games, animals, her friends, making new friends, and anything that's fun
Dislikes:Girly stuff, bullies, whenever her parents abuse her(now she lives with Stan and her parents got arrested), and her past
Crush:Bradley Biggle

Please continue This is great!

Ah finally, nice to see Wade now in the story. Though sad to see he didn't get much of a part in the chapter, I take it he'll play more in the next. Okay I got to admit, Jake almost had me there, but just when he said Xboxes, that was kind of a dick move.

Still can't wait to see the next chapter. Would be awesome if Wade always and I mean always, calls Cartman fat or grand fatass wizard, :P. good luck, till next time
PAR KOTE BAL IJAAT BE MAND'ALOR!

I'm back! Just a great chapter! Love it!

Aaawww yeah everyone's getting a Xbox and PS4s can geet out!

Loved it so much!

can my OC be in the story

Name: Jasmine Marsh

Nickname: Jazzy, Jaz and J

Eyes: emerald green

Age: 10

Birthday: December 24

Personality: Jasmine is a kind, sweet girl who is really smart and loves hanging out with her friends even when the adventures they go on are crazy

Past: Jasmine was adopted by the Marsh family when she was 13 soon to be 14 when he was in foster care because of her abusive parents and sense then she has loved her new family.

Eating amount: Eats regularly sometimes most of the time eats very little

Sleeping Amount: About 2 hours

Personal Possessions: her locket Stan gave her on her 13th birthday with a picture of both of them

alter-ego: Mystery (side-kick to Mysterion)

Fears: losing her family, friends and crush

Likes: To be with Kenny, her family, her friends, drawing anime, playing, Football, Soccer

Dislikes: her friends and family getting hurt

Clothes: She wears a red t-shirt, black jeans, and dark red running shoes, a orange jacket, a hat that looks like Kyle's and orange gloves

Habits: Singing when she's board

Mottos: Let's do it to it!

Other Info: Plays guitar, sings and Skate board/Roller skate on free time.

Friends: Token, Wendy, Bebe, Tweek and Christopher

Best Friends: Cartman, Clyde, Craig, Kyle

Crush: Kenny (he likes her back)

So intense! GO PS4! YEAH INFAMOUS SECOND SON! Awesome... just so awesome,.

Thanks for putting him in

I overall liked this chapter a lot, keep up the good work, also wanted to let you know that if you wanted to use Sean for other chapters for this fic, you have my permission to do so.