Reviews for Strawberry Shortcake |
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jbadillodavila chapter 1 . 6/14 Muy bueno. |
kayer713 chapter 12 . 5/24/2019 I'm glad things worked out. Nice ending! |
kayer713 chapter 11 . 5/24/2019 I think Kisuke would have gotten around to doing the right thing if nothing more than being a good friend. Not like Byakuya but he has a caring enough heart to look out for others. He'd have been a nice weekend dad at the least |
kayer713 chapter 10 . 5/24/2019 OH NO! SO SAD! |
kayer713 chapter 8 . 5/24/2019 Damn Yoruichi you lied to Kisuke too? He didn't know. Oh that's bad! Stealth force should be more stealth. I actually feel bad for both of them. Nothing wrong with being an independent woman with options but be responsible. Oh what's going to happen now? |
kayer713 chapter 11 . 5/24/2019 Oh no Yoruichi, technically you were still with Byakuya when you were with Kisuke sonce you hadn't officially ended things yet. The scandal! lol |
kayer713 chapter 5 . 5/24/2019 OMG is it Byakuya's or Kisuke's?! |
kayer713 chapter 4 . 5/24/2019 Oh Oh Byakuya is wrong here. He can't expect to always do what he wants but never what she wants. Maybe it worked like that with Hisana because she was more submissive. Or maybe she was more like him. He should be considerate of Yoruichi's feelings |
Xale Crest chapter 12 . 4/24/2019 I really love this story, thou I feel that the last two chapters were somewhat written in a hurry. Of but still, your creativity is awesome. I just hope that when ypure no longer busy, u find time to edit the last two chapter |
Guest chapter 7 . 12/15/2018 Now that I read this again I believe Yoruichi did nothing wrong. I mean she is an independent woman after all and technically she was smashing Kisuke when they were separated. It's not a big deal when a man does it but a whole story when a women does lol. Byakuya get over ursel Love the story by the way! Please write more Byakuya x Yoruichi fics! |
Guest chapter 5 . 12/14/2018 Great work. I love all your stories. Are you going to write more by a x yoruichi fanfics. |
Fresh breath chapter 1 . 2/25/2017 Just read this story again and I'm glad I did. Very entertaining and sexy. I'm glad they get their happy ending! |
Guest chapter 12 . 2/25/2017 Simply AMAZING! |
Guest chapter 12 . 4/16/2016 Nice story! :) |
Guest chapter 12 . 4/16/2016 Woah. You had some hot steamy stuff happening which I super loved by the way! ;) I don't normally read stories with Yoroichi and Byakuya (I love her with Kisuke) but this one was fun so I think I shall read more of this coupling. :) |