Are you going to continue this fanfic soon? This is good, please continue until it's finished. many are waiting for your fanfic update

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Keep up the great work this story looks good.

Really awesome story, keep it going!

Anyone who has watched Dragon Ball Z knows how powerful a hybrid can get

You should add Ophis to the harem, I would love to read that.

I want to apologize about your mother's condition in Shinji Murmur. You have my blessings and hope your mother gets the strength she needs to overcome that disease.

I really hope she gets well really soon and continue your stories no matter what life throws at ya. whether it be good or bad

Also you should make Medaka Kurokami a Archangel class fallen angel and one of Grigori's leaders.

One more thing:

You should do a story with Shinji wielding the powers of all 3 Atlantis Dragons. Make The Atlantis Dragons divine dragons and more power than Ophis and Great Red.

I love your changes continue this story and your other stories. I was wondering, If you can rewrite Rise of The Satan V1 into Rise of The Satan V2. I know yo discontinued it but, just think about rewriting it.

Here is my list additions to Rise of The Satan V2:
* Shinji should be an overpowered character.
* Misato Katsuragi & Ritsuko Akagi should be Shinji's caretakers and the older siblings of Ophis & Great Red or members of The Great Dragon Council.
* Make Issei the son of Azazel and Give him a Heavenly Sacred Gear like Wake in The Golden Lucifer.
* Naruto Uzumaki must be The son of The Biblical God and The New Leader of The Angels.
* Make is a mega multicrossover series.
* Add The Great Dragon Council to the story.
* Katerea Leviathan must be a good guy. She becomes one of The Supreme Commanders of The Anti-Satan Faction and one of The Leaders of The Underworld and true head of The Leviathan clan.

I am just saying, you should think about it. Until then, keep doing what you are doing.

You need t continue this story along with your other stories. I am going to like this story a whole lot in the future.

Love the setup and looking forward to the next chapter :)

It's a great story but u could edit by letting his girls sleep with him (Like what ReisFriend mention), it's more heartwarming though in jealously for Akeno which is normal. But still I have to admit I love the story. Hope to read more interesting parts of the story.

Akenos breast are a J Cup (102cm) look up the wiki

How have they not figured out his dragon half with his name being "Ddraig"?

like akeno and shinjis attitudes. hope for more about them and their team to be revealed to the devils at kuoh

Awfully lot of money for simple contracts and it's pretty amazing that no one offered their services when the money offered was huge. It would have been more realistic if the mercs that offered their services were hentais who wanted to see Rias and Sona naked possibly and given the chance, to violate the cute mortals in Kuoh.

And a gentleman Issei doesn't seem right. One of the things I like about DxD is that the main man (Issei) is a hentai and get's all the hotties. Usually in harem animes the main man get's shy when he sees a little bit of skin or accdentally gropes the hottie which gives off the impression that the main man doesn't like girls. So a hentai Issei who hides it by being a gentleman would have been better. And he is a dragon/devil hybrid, so wouldn't lust be one of his defining qualities? Like for instance: "Anything for you Rias." 'And for your awesome tits of course.'

And you could, for humor, make Kuroka clingy. Like for instance, she get's upset and sad that Shinji doesn't show love for her more often because cat's need love. And she could also sneak into Shinji's and Akeno's bed to cuddle both of them because she just loves it when their bodies rub hers.

But overall this chapter promises many great things. I always wonder how a story, where Shinji becomes Rias's servant, would look like if you wrote it.

That is quite a paycheck