CatsPats31, this story is 6 years old, if it hasn't been taken down for the explicit content yet it will not get taken down for that despite what the rules say, besides there are stories that are a lot worse and I don't see you warning them hell just look up Naruto lemons and you'll see a lot of shit, so go warn them and leave this beautiful story out of it

Hey Hey! :)

Oh my God. This is the cutest Oneshot I've ever read. This would be the perfect Szenario in the Manga/Anime if Naruto had confessed his love right after the fight. I don't know if you read this,but i have a question...Can i translate your Oneshot in German (my native language,sorry for my bad english,whoops,haha) and upload it on the german Site of fanfiction? It would be a honour!

Thank you so much for this cute Oneshot!

Who is the Sakura you are discribing? Bevause it sure isn't the Sakira from the Naruto manga. Kill yourself, virgin.

During the fight with pain when Hinata told Naruto that he saved her from bullies that never happened all filling and flashbacks on non-canon on top of that I quote Naruto doing his fight with Gaara I could have been just like him I hated everyone and everyone intern hated me at what point in time of him hating everyone did he have time to save her so it's non-canon

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Great Story.

I really like this fiction. It was well written exactly what I needed to read after recent events. Anyways you did a great job.

awesome

Hello! Thanks for publishing!

I think the flow of your writing could really be improved if you worked on including more contractions and more "active voice" rather than passive voice. Currently, it can get pretty stiff and formal sounding, making it awkward or clunky to read.

Of course, that isn't to say your writing is wrong grammatically or whatever, because it's not. It's just something I noticed that I think could help you grow as a writer.

Thanks again for publishing this one-shot!

Beautifully written.

you done a great job bro

Instint fav!

And that is how Boruto was conceived. on a serious note I love this so much I think I've read it maybe 3 times and I love you because you're amazing and I wish this would never end

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Awesome one shot, they jumped into each other kinda fast but you walked the characters through the process excellently, didn't seem ooc at all.