Great story. I play clarinet and I have been taking exams for it and music theory. I am going to sit grade 2 performance in March next year I hope.

Interesting concept. The SSHG came out of left field, so in my mind I paired it with To Sir With Love’s long-distance letter-writing slow burn.

too much exposition/info dump. i can tell this would potentially be an engaging story but i need scenes & dialogue to keep from skimming impatiently.

Hi just read your story it was very good.

wow. I read the story in one go and I have to say it was such a good read!
Thank you so much for this! And well done!

Rereading, again!

Phoebe is a beautiful name, especially with the message and meaning behind it.

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So much useless information in here just to have a high word count. Repeating things over and over when they can be glossed. We know it already the character doesn't need the whole thing repeated. The whole conversation could be glossed over
Q.Q it's painful
It just needs a really good Beta and to cut out repetitive stuff. And unnecessary filler information.

Great story

Your writing is very clean, and I like the idea that Hermione would have set up a false identity during/before the war; it makes sense for her canonically even! But Ron and Harry were so horrendously OOC, I just can't continue. I'm all for a spot of Ron bashing (and Snape pointed out perfectly the canon reasons to support this angle), but you pushed it beyond. And this Harry sounded nothing like Harry Potter. I just can't suspend my disbelief enough to continue. I'll have to check out your other work to see if I find something more in character for the characters we all know.

ahh Slytherin! nice!

man I'm glad the wand maker didn't turn her in!

that wand sounds cool!

well.. very thorough!

Loved the OC'S! Thanks so much

Wow! This was really good!