Awesome! Loved it!

You blew me away. I don't know if it was because of the flawless wordplay or the fact that Leila and Murph let their bodies do the talking instead. It was refreshing to see that it wasn't all dialogue. You didn't develop these two amazing characters with dialogue but with actual MEANINGFUL actions. I loved it!

I love both of the twins but I'm definitely more of a Murphy girl so I was so excited when I saw you posted this! I loved the way you wrote it and how it all played out, especially Murph's reaction after he essentially got all of his emotions out on her :)

Her telling him to take it out on her. Perfectly delivered here.
His need to get away from his father and brother, i also think was perfect. his emotions were a wreck and with things haunting him she was his savior here. I loved it! You packed a big punch in a small one shot, great.

I LOVE this. You did it again with the emotional, redemptive, healing sex. Like I've told you, you have a signature and I read you all over this. Murphy is not OOC, don't worry about that. Oh I needed a nice OC story :) I like Leila...she's good for my Murphy lol!
It is such a believable premise that Murphy would be so burdened with all the events that happened and then having to go back to Ireland. I felt his tension. Losing Rocco :( Its like his world is turning upside down.
"..the devil dangling a distraction on front of him." I love that line!
Bathroom sex... furtive, desperate, cleansing bathroom sex. I loved it. "Murphy MacManus, fuck me."Okay thud...that was moment inducing. Can I say this might be the best smut you've written? (of what I've read of yours) This was intense and erotic and so...hot hot hot. I loved the little detail about Leila kissing his mole. Wanna do that myself lol! Um, I will be re reading this many times...
Can't end the review without reminding you that above all this piece is excellently written in your fluid concise descrptive style.