"Everything was just going right."

That's when you know things are not gonna go very great soon.

Anyways, I'm really loving this story so far! I hope you'll be continuing this story, but I won't force you or anything. I know it can be hard, writing a fic, thinking about how to write them, and still gotta deal with irl matters. I'm just letting you know I really love this story :)

-How to Get a Job and Keep it

BOI SIGN ME TF UP THANKS

cute

Next chapter please! :3 love this story so much!
LGAHD

I loved this story! It was amazing! I hope you continue it!

Lovely!

Plz update ASAP!

Wouldn't have COME*
Not came

Okay, you finally reviewed my story and updated this, so I guess it would be fair if I reviewed... altho yure a brick for ignoring me for so long o.e

Im still sleep deprived from animatsuri and school so excuse my crankiness, yes? At least I haven't stabbed anyone the two days I've been at school. It's something.

I liked the link you put between Hidan and Tayuya - I've finally someone sharing my belief. Fuck yeah.

Questions end with question marks not periods.

Tbh I feel like I can relate to Dei in this story in some aspects '-' and Sasori has some major issues, really. The first prolly being thinking there are no issues.

Orochi is a piece of shit in this story too, that much is obvious. Think it wud be cool writing a story with a major plottwist - orochi turns out to be a good guy.

Uhh... im not sure what else to write. Looking forward to more updates? Yes.

See yu
(Sleep deprived heart)

Aww, their singing karaoke!
I wonder what they would sound like...
Anyways, I like the story!
But Orochimaru's seems like a bad guy... So something bad might happen...
Noo I don't want people to get hurrtt, or bad things to happenn
Okay actually I do want it to happen..For the story...Just no deaths...
SO! I look forward to the rest of this story! :)

Aw man, I would kill to see Sasori singing karaoke XD

Please update soon and are you gonna make them just friends or a couple cause it would be cool either way but I would like to see how they would make it work as a couple

Am I the only one finding Sasori and Deidara clinging to each other adorable?

Hehehehe... sounds evil, but cute at the same time. I really liked the questions and the fact that they both practically pooed their pants haha...I also love the way you're building the relationship up, it's mega kawaii... I noticed a mistake, but can't remember where it was, only a minor one otherwise I'd remember lol. I don't like his adoptive parents either :/ thanks for another great chapter... hope to read more soon... please... xx

WAS THAT A VIBRATOR DEI WAS PLAYING WITH XD
ALSO WAS THE /TALL/ MAN SAM WINCHESTER
I dont know what more to say .-. I didnt spot any grammatical errors so I cant lengthen the review rambling over that either.
Oh well. Im off to the next chappie
Ciaooo

Eeeeeek, please update soon, it's really amazing. I like the way you've written it, and what you've done with the colour blue :3 xx

Lolz! Great job. Again.