LMAO I LOVE HOW IT JUST ENDS- LIKE IK IT ISNT SUPPOSED TO BE A ONE SHOT BUT I LOVE THIS

Wow, this is a great start to what promises to be an interesting story. It's too bad that it seems you've given up on this.

umm, but why

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WHAT HAPPENS NEXT D:
Great writing though!

okay that is not the ending i expected damn
great work!

omg.

YOU MUST CONTINUE THIS BEFORE BEFORE I LOSE THE LITTLE SANITY I HAVE !

THAT DID NOT GO THE WAY I WAS EXPECTING! Why? Why would you do that to my poor, broken heart? This story was really good even if it did hurt me emotionally.

Is this going to be a two-shot? If you finish it, I'll love you forever! In, you know, a totally platonic and not at all creepy kind of way.

Aww, still no update? I guess this is dead. :( (much like Sanji, haha-ha... ehm)
Well, if nothing else, it makes for an okay horror story in the shape it is. xD

SANJI NOOO!

Mate you write better One Piece fics than anyone else! UPDATE PLEASE!

The question is did the woman drug him with the cake or has he really gotten a bad case of the flu and someone who recognized him for his bounty decided to take advantage? I mean, sure, it is certainly leaning toward old lady witch, but he only thinks he hears the old woman croon.
Now, why not you wrap up this beautiful little bite of angst with a happy little dollop of fluffy ending? Answer my question? Please? Can I bribe you? I'll totes write stuff, though I'm not sure it's worth anything to you. I've got chocolate, reviews? Come on bub, name your price!

What comes after this?