wow...i was totally bawling throughout this whole story and was also totally pissed off at Gibbs and Vance for pushing thru Tim and Sarah's past like bulldozers.

Always loved their commentary together

Excellent job with this story. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. Can't wait for whatever next that inspires you.

Good that finally Tim saw what he needed to believe that he loves Ziva. Only one part of Tim family was f*&ked up and that part is dead and buried. Nice chapter. Good luck with your classes and getting those degrees you want.

Beautiful . . . a hard road to travel to get there, but they reached "Beautiful".

This chapter was a very good ending to the story. I am looking forward to future works.

lovely story well done!

Yes that last line made my day! more please!

Yay! for Ebony managing to bartend AND go back to school.
One day, maybe when I'm a retiree (or maybe earlier, if I have spare cash to play the lottery and I win) I want to go back to uni and study psychology, like Ebony is doing, but also Latin, Hebrew and Greek and maybe philosophy and economics. My first time at uni I got degrees in library science and political science, respectively, which, while not bad, did not allow me to study everything I am interested in.
"hunt down his killed" - "hunt down his killer"?

That wine and cookies sounds like some kind of communion, if not necessarily a holy one, but maybe holy, in a different way yet.
"she had in completely within her" - "had him completely".

"taken a page form the Romanov's book" - "the Romanovs' book".
I am looking forward to the tornado that will be Ziva and Ebony's first meeting.
I'm also feeling kind of chuffed for Ebony that she did get to have sex with Tim once, even if they are now only the best of friends.

Did you mean "Haemophobia" or "Hemophobia"? Because "Homophobia" (which is what is written in this chapter currently) is something else entirely.

AW!

I really hope John McGee IS paying that hefty price in hell.

AW! for Ebony holding on to Tim and not letting go.