I love this story. The Little Mermaid is my favorite movie.

Is very good and I think that you do not need to change anything.

Wow! This story was really good! I loved it!

Extremely impressive backstory for Arquan! It's so well fleshed out and I love how you reveal that there's a bigger threat than Bloodshot. Thumbs up all the way

Thoroughly enjoyed reading about Captain Bloodshot! He certainly makes for a compelling villain, and so does Hemsworth.

Best reference so far: "Mine! Mine! Mine!" (Mine me that gold... Yes, I just popped another reference in, from Pocahontas, lol)

So, I found this story last night, and fell asleep with my phone because I couldn't stop reading. It is hella dark, I almost threw up at the first scene with the captain (that really is like reading about a cannibal, like Hannibal Lecter *shudder*), and it's so gruesome it's like an accident where you can't look away. Congrats on making the scariest villain ever. Sauron? Emperor Palpatine? Thanos? Voldemort? They've got nothing on Bloodshot. He is right up there with Joffrey and Ramsay Bolton from GOT, sadistic and sickening. (A girl should give Jaqen H'ghar a name: Captain Bloodshot. And a man will do the rest. )

When you make these 16 stories about Disneys the Little Mermaid Beyond the Shore and take it to Disney Animation TV you should leave out the part about King Triton losing his arm you should write to Jodie Benson who played Ariel about this I'm sure she would be open to reprising her role for the series a reeboot and adding all of Melodys cousins and her brother Dorian yes Jodie should know that Ariel had another baby and the name of Melodys male and female cousins.

I loved it you should go to Disney Animation and make thos a reeboot or rather sequel series on Disney Channel and Disney Jr. I knew when I saw Alex the first time in the Little Mermaid 2 that he was Urchins son and I as a fan would like to know where are Ariels six sisters Aquata Alana Arista Adrina Adella and the sixth one whose name escapes me and lets not forget Spot the whale Ariels friend he should have a reunion with her make it a cartoon tv series for 2019 or 2020 pitch it to Disney Animation.

I just read the story again and please write a sequel.

I really enjoyed this story. Because The Little Mermaid used to be my sister’s favorite movie I started to hate it from watching it every other week. Ironically I really liked the second even though my sister didn’t. I only decided to look for a Little Mermaid fanfic because some of my friends are acting in the musical. I don’t know what made me pick your story maybe it was because I’ve always liked Melody as a character or the fact that I liked that it didn’t appear to be only romance but I’m glad I did. This was amazing. Your plot was really good and your villains were really impressive. They all seemed realistic. You did a really good job with the family dynamics. Like how a parent wants what is best for their kid even if it’s not what they want. I was also really interested in all the Little Mermaid facts. I have only seen the movies and didn’t even know that there was a show. I’m really impressed by how much research you did for this fanfic. I loved finding the Easter eggs even though I didn’t understand them because I’m not a big Disney fan. I really enjoyed this and one other story of yours that I read. Unfortunately I’ve never seen most of the shows you write about but I can’t wait to see what else you create. Good job on this story and good luck on whatever you’re writing now.

-KeepHoping

Jame hook is the who killed mermaid queen

WAIT! HE DIED! IS FAMILY, WHATS GONNA HAPPEN TO THEM! I LIKED HEMSWORTH!

J

I'm crying. This story is so beautiful.

Sigh... I think that you might be my favorite author of all time. Realistic stories, great plots, lots of diversity... have you thought about writing a book yet? I would definitely read it! You must have a great personality too, from your author's notes. Wah! I was so happy to be reading this story until... the dreaded 'the end' appeared... I knew it had to be sooner or later, but I'd rather it be sooner than later. I'll see you again in another story. Ja ne~