Really not a fan of how you portrayed Fugaku in this story, but I guess sacrifices for character development must be made.
(•3•) Puhhh

Well damn, you didn't lie when you said that you would make a major skip with character-development, would've been better if you could've did it over at least two chapters, but it's still a great story so far
(•3•) Puhhh

And you did it once again, I don't think there's another author on this site that can have me shiver with excitement by only describing the logic behind a henge. This chapter was incredibly well written, as I've come to expect of you. I liked your quasi-psychoanalysis of the Sasuke in your story, that one paragraph gave me a smile so huge that my cheeks(face) hurt. I'm not exactly sure what you'll do with the other 17 people, will some of them be OCs? Or will you just focus on the known crew?
The only thing I did not appreciate as much in this chapter was Sakura. I don't quite get the transition from being scared out of her wits to so angry that she just charged into a possible deathtrap. I don't dislike her or anything, but the transition felt weird.
Other than that, this story already shows great potential (as I've come to expect from you :P) and I'll definitely consume more of it.
Thanks for releasing some more of those wonderful word strings that your brain expels. ("Thanks for sharing your exceptional work" would be boring)
(•3•) Puhhh

Ok 3 things...
1) loving the story so far
2) hoping for naru/saku and sasu/into but we'll see what you decide haha
3) more frequent updates would be awesome if possible :)

When is ino going to show up? I cant wait to see how she fits into this story

A nice story. Truly remarkable. However... I was wondering where Ino could be. I mean she wasn't even mentioned in the story not for once, even though her name is in the filter.

Uwaa I hope to have Sasuke X Ino. In any case that is entirely up to you though. A wonderful story. Please continue!

-Rinny-

Thanks for the story
But I don't think this is for me

Naruto's a thief , Sasuke's insane , and Sakura's temper made her a great shinobi.
That's an unusual beginning to be sure.
The summary feels more misleading than anything.
What I mean is people use the "words destroy the world" all the time in summaries and Naruto still doesn't get any conflict internally.
Maybe, I'm just not being fair but I think that you could have worded that differently .
The actual chapter was okay.
The Jonin acted as they do in multiple fics incredibly cryptic and harsh to make them seem badass .
Once again seen it alot , and I'm not sure I'll like it.

Thanks for writing

This story is very impressive and I'm looking forward to what the future brings. Keep up the good work.

Please update your story SOON! I love it and I can't wait to read more!

Are you sure this is your first story? Cause you clearly write like a pro!

Love it!

This has gotten me so hooked, write quickly my friend.

This is an amazing start. I cannot wait to read more.

Keep writing man. This is really good. It's nice to see some quality coming back to this site.

Sasusaku all the way! (Sorry for anyone who doesn't agree with me.) I think the plot is wonderful! Great job. I love this story.