Reviews for Out alone with two carnivores |
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yaoishipsforlife chapter 3 . 11/7/2018 kinda hoped we'd get reborn's reaction to this relationship development |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2018 Coccyx, labial frenulum, sorry I had no idea this was a science journal. |
ChaosHearth chapter 3 . 8/3/2017 Poor poor Tsuna |
MadFangirlNeko chapter 3 . 6/20/2017 This is the end? But... I want more. |
Hinatauchiha1 chapter 3 . 5/4/2017 Hahaha it would be so good if this turned out to be a mpreg with tsuna being pregnant with both their babies I mean that could happen,he could be having twins one of each of them and I can just imagine tuna Horny all the time haha that would be kinda funny and nice I hope you can make a sequel of this |
Siera-Knightwalker chapter 3 . 4/23/2017 So hot... and so cute... the part where Mukuro was uncertain...mhmm. i liked that part. |
White-Angel94 chapter 1 . 4/17/2017 read, nosebleed, enjoyed, like it, WANT MORE OF THEM! |
Misaki Amano chapter 3 . 1/31/2017 Omg si smutty loved plz make a other omg Kyaaaaaaaaaa! |
Darkness7913 chapter 3 . 9/26/2016 Kya!(fangirl screams) 182769! I love this! Tsu really can't do a thing about Hibari and Mukuro but at least they agree on something! Less destruction too! |
Redb4Black chapter 3 . 1/7/2016 Poor Tsuna get fucked til he's fucked up... Get it? . No? ... Fine... |
Dancing-like-mah-Daddy chapter 3 . 10/7/2015 Poor Tsuna-kun! |
The Crystal Pen chapter 3 . 7/30/2015 Very hot. Heheh Tsuna is so lucky to have those sex demons after him. |
angelaneahwalker chapter 3 . 3/17/2015 lol..definetely one of my favorites! |
Guest chapter 3 . 3/1/2015 I really like the threesome play. I know this was published back in 2014, but I feel there are some areas that need improvements. 1) Spelling & Grammatical Errors. There are a lot of places, but the most common spelling I saw was whenever you say "then" in the fic, I believe you meant to say "when". It made more sense that way. 2) I don't quite understand why you keep saying Tsuna "shrugged". When you interpret shrug, it kind of gives off a "I don't care" gesture. This can also apply to Hibari's snorts. Most times, it would have been better to say he grunted rather than snorted. |
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 3 . 2/10/2015 I really like it! ** |