Wow, what a refreshing read! All of the wonderful things I've come to expect from your style and some new added flavours.

I like the omniscient POV during the phone call. Letting us into Akashi's feelings is super good.

Keep it up. I'm very excited.

Hey there. This is a really great story, and I hope you finish it. As I read through your story, I noticed something that was a bit off. It seems that you're mixing up the characters' given names and their surnames. For example: when you're talking about Murasakibara's family, you have said "the Atsushi family" when it should be "the Murasakibara family" since Murasakibara is the last name, and Atsushi is Murasakibara's first name. The Japanese would say his name as "Murasakibara Atsushi", but in English, it would be "Atsushi Murasakibara".

Just wanted to let you know that. Other than that, the story is absolutely amazing.

Hope they find Akashi soon. . O.o so much misunderstanding.
Please continue updating ! Love it so far

Holy shit. This is fucking insane. You got that teen angst on point. This story and MuraAka in general needs more love.

I'm just sitting here like, why doesn't this story have more reviews and follows xD

WHAT? what happened!? Did.. did akashi fall..?
Update!

Goddangit akashi don't do this..

I like the way you portray murasakibara hope to see more .. :3

ahh...rebellious Mukkun with seductive Aka Chin...it'll be interesting. Can't wait for your update

Aww, MuraAka
I can't wait for the next chapter..

Oh, it's soo good, I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

I really like this and can't wait to see where it goes! A blushing Akashi is one of the most cutest things ever xD