Reviews for Private fun at the poolside |
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TbagTheGreat chapter 1 . 9/27/2018 That was very well done. Aside from a few minor grammatical and spelling errors, I see nothing that can be improved upon. Great read! |
LanceSennin chapter 1 . 5/11/2018 Use of Words: 8.75/10 Plot: 8.5/10 Story Flow: 8.5/10 Overall: 8.5/10 That said, what a great fanfic! I luv Xenovia! |
ACExMAVIS chapter 1 . 3/15/2018 nice |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2017 It was awesome usually high school DDD fanfics are just randome people making issei fuck someone but YOU captured what Xenvoia is really someone who just wants to be a mother |
Ancient Sith Tulak Hord chapter 1 . 8/25/2017 Xenovia one my top favs. My list mostly Irina Xenovia cause they have quirks to them |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2017 I'm going to be completely honest with you...I LOVE THIS STORY OF YOURS MAN! If I'm being totally honest with you, I think my favorite paring in High School DXD would definitely be Issei X Xenovia. Seriously, you did an amazing job with this story. I can't wait to start reading the second story of yours. This is some really good fan-fiction right here if I do say so myself. Keep up the good work my friend. You are INCREDIBLE! |
ReaperCrew7 chapter 1 . 3/16/2017 naw brother it was perfect |
CoolFire9000 chapter 1 . 9/30/2016 Best Xenovia fan fiction I've ever seen! |
Pervert chapter 1 . 9/28/2016 Make the akeno one from the locker room |
11Doctor chapter 1 . 4/29/2016 great story! you could'v added more detal to the sex, mainly when issei cums. (god, i'm just as bad as issei). other then that, i liked it! |
Blazeb79 chapter 1 . 3/6/2016 Very good one shot! |
Cool Dude chapter 1 . 2/17/2016 I really don't see anything you need to work on! Good Job :) |
ReisFriend chapter 1 . 12/10/2015 If a situation like this happened, I could die without regrets. It was quite erotic when Xenovia is concerned, she is quite moe. |
genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 1 . 9/20/2015 nice |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2015 Nice |