I wish this was continued, it's really promising.

That was awesome. Ugh I feel so dirty yet so satisfied

This is so well-written and extremely HOT.
That's all.

It would be cool if it has another chapter..but this is fine!

OMG, I really like it! I love this Tom, and the smut scene was amazing.
It has a potential to be multi-chaptered, but I think this way is much more better.
On the beginning I had a problem to adjust to first person, but the latter, the better.
:)
PS. Sorry for my English. I'm good at reading, but writing and talking is still a problem of mine.

I feel like this could definitely be a multi-chap story. I'm not usually fond of first person, but I liked this written that way. Well done.

Tori

Loved it!

Will Hermione be Tom's tied & gagged love slave?