How dare you end it there and mark it as complete? Ha ha this was so good! I loved the idea of the dream world and the hint of Rikuo's back story. Oh... it needs more. I hope you'll write more some day :D

I like this! I suggest explaining the variation of Rikuo's not begin human in the second chapter, (it was confusing for a while,) but that can be done easily with him explaining the details to Kaza. Otherwise very good! Please keep this going, I like it! :)

A divergence from the original storyline, but I like it :) I hope you will continue this story - it seems quite intriguing and I'm glad that the fandom is still alive! I started a story almost a year ago and really need to get it finished and new D&D stories just motivate me to write!
Thanks for the new, interesting story and please update soon!