Reviews for The Behemoth |
---|
Samuel Santillan chapter 2 . 7/2 The Behemoth quiero el capitulo 9 10,11,12,13,14 de esta historia |
Samuel Santillan chapter 1 . 5/30 quiero subas el capitulo 9 y 10 y un narutoxkonokaxsetsuna |
DreigoththeVampireGod chapter 3 . 5/26 Loved the sekirei kameo |
Samuel Santillan chapter 8 . 4/16 me encanta quiero mas capitulos un naruto x kuroka x setsuna y un harem |
Guest chapter 8 . 8/19/2017 can you put this up ofr adoption |
Guest chapter 8 . 7/12/2017 can you put this story up for adoption |
Milennial chapter 8 . 8/18/2016 Heh, whilst I discovered Negima only recently, I have to say I rather like this story all things considered. It is not perfect, but it also definitively is not bad by any means and it can be rather hilarious at times. I also like the dual tone of the more peaceful academy and the darker world of the gang affairs. Either way, nicely done, heres hoping for more... |
Guest chapter 8 . 2/5/2016 XD would've done the same i'm not sticking around in a place that's on fire. |
dragongodling chapter 8 . 1/23/2016 when will this be updated? |
draco7347 chapter 8 . 12/29/2015 cant wait for new chapters |
matthewdeal25 chapter 8 . 12/5/2015 Will there be more chapters for this story? |
StoneTheLoner chapter 4 . 11/13/2015 That had to be the slowest, unnecessarily drawn out fight scene I've ever read. And again and again I find Naruto lacking. Absolutely nothing about him shows that he's strong, or dangerous. He comes off as nothing but a common thug. |
StoneTheLoner chapter 3 . 11/13/2015 Please don't turn this into a fic where the main character is easily controlled by every member of the female race... It's such an overdone thing in the Negima fanfiction section. He's the leader of one of the biggest gangs in the country, make him act like it... |
BBWulf chapter 8 . 9/10/2015 This is pretty damn good. Great for lols, at the very least. |
Mikaeru346 chapter 8 . 8/8/2015 If when he still just a child sneezing can cause big building on fire, what if he get flu... Chaos |