Now, I love this story and all, but you said,"See you in Chapter 4", and I don't see a Chapter 4 . . . But otherwise, great job! I'm glad to see you writing more!

you are such a talented writer! i love the way that you've portrayed the characters' personalities quite accurately compared to others fics that I've read. Honestly amazed with the writing style and can't wait till you post the next chapter!

You are amazing. I actually love this (even though I thought frozen and the guardians were kinda annoying/childish)! Please keep writing!

Ooooh, I love this. Your writing style's AMAZING. And that encounter between Olaf and Pitch - fantastic! I can't wait 'till your next chapter.

Please write the next chapter! I love your writing so much!

I liked Guardians, loved Frozen. You've got a surprisingly amazing grasp of the characters from both worlds. You'd have a recipe for success with that alone.

The fact that you've conjured up an interesting story too is icing on the cake.

Brilliant.

Was going to read the next Alpha and Omega book, when I found this! So far, I like it. Keep up the good work.

mierda es demasiado bueno sigue

I really enjoyed this story so far. It is well written compare to other fanfiction and I am puzzle as to way you don't have many reviews, hmm maybe it's because it's not a popular fandom? Oh well, I still like this story and hope you update soon and make it a little longer. Gonna fave this now bye.

Loved the part with when she reached for his hand. I really hope we can read the next chapter soon.

UPDATE MAN UPDAAAAAATE !

The plot thickens...

Ah yes, the drama is coming!
I'm really excited for this -
And aw that kiss, so adorable.
Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Man, I am just getting really annoyed with how many awesome stories I am finding on here lately. After just joining this fandom, I haven't been able to stop reading! But I am really grateful that so many awesome writers are on here. 3

You might of wrote this to get past you block, but what you have so far is just great. I really enjoyed it, and it had me really excited the whole read. Please keep going till the end, because out of the current pile of stories I have read, this is actually the first one with a plot like this.

Okay so now I have to quickly gush... The writing the writing the writing is sooooo gooood! You write every one just like from the movies and I love when writer's stick to that. These two kill me inside and your story doesn't help that feeling but I love it allllll!

Omg omg omg! I love this fanfic! It is sooo interesting! Awesome, totally awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh my, I am so hooked to this story! Feyfa