As with everything you write, this was fantastic. Not enough citrus but it was the perfect amount of sweet!

What a fantastic story! I like your Rennie a lot! The way their relationship plays out and some of the freak out thoughts that occur make it much easier to wrap my head around and I loved it!

Omg this was cute and long lol

Could never read this pairing before now and it was done so well I'm just gobsmacked. Love your characters, the lore and the lessons!

God I miss your stories and you so Much :)

Just re-read it for the nth time, still loved it. I love your use of words..."all silk cloaks and steel daggers" is a favourite. A little bit of drool still comes out whenever I'm reading about your Jacob.

Love the story so far, hope you do more soon

(eyes sparkle with delight)
I love it...although you misspelled "Renesmee" in the title...

WHAT! How can you end it like that. Omg I loved every part of the story. It was such a surprise when Jake asked her to marry him. FYI there wasn't enough lemons I recon ;). I recons you should of put the mating of the two that bounds them together forever as the ending and her getting pregnant and and and having beautiful babies and living happily ever after. But I loved the story. Totally amazing :D

I absolutely loved your story. How did you think of something so creative. What a glorious ride you provided. I was so anxious during the confrontations. Trying to change Renesmee. Nahuel as a suitor. Jacob you wrote him with all the sex appeal he deserves.
My favorites are finally telling the truth and the secret weapon. Needless to say I cried at the end. Please give us more of this couple one day. A baby ?

Ok, I took a chance on this because it's you, and once again I'm completely amazed. You made Rennie into a completely new, likeable, uncreepy character that we can all love. Brava. I am impressed.

Now I need to go shower because...ick. I read a Jake/Ness story and I liked it :P

You knock me off my feet every time I read your amazing books.

That's all. ;)

This was lovely. I absolutely adore the rebellious Rennie and the dominant Alpha Jacob. Very, very thrilling, but I honestly wish it had lasted much, much longer. You should most definitely continue in another story. As in, make a sequel. Also, your vocabulary is exquisite. Sometimes I had trouble keeping up, but that's exactly how I like it! Again, this fanfiction was so amazing and enthralling; I couldn't put it down.

This was a great story. You're dialogue was so believable and your characters totally made sense. I've never seen Edward and Bella as bad guys, but it made complete sense when you pointed out how and why vamps are unchanging. And the humor was spot on. Well done. I want more!

This story was great! I hope that you plan on writing more Nessie and Jacob stories because this one was amazing.