This would be really good if you continued it. Go through different important moments between them and what they are thinking and how things change between them. Just a thought.

Cute, cuteee! It's great how you focused on this point of their story and the intensity they spark together. Really good. xx

I really enjoyed this story. Adds a lot to one of my favourite scenes between these two.

jaja me encanta! ;)

I really hope you make more one shots for this pairing :)

Amazing! I hope you make more fics!

Amaz