Each time I see 'flame all you want, I'm fireproof', I just see a challenge.

You want the hate.
You become defensive.

It becomes tempting to try for it.

Don't really have anything to antagonise you with though aside from making everyone British you moffet.

Or 'tosser'?

Grevious wouldn't care about courts, he would want to kill them by his own 'hands'.

Also nothing is fire proof, all is able to burn, except for fire. You can't set flames on fire. You can't freeze ice.

Seems really out of character, some of Grevious' choice of words such as 'buggers', 'bloody' , 'mates'. Also he is less inclined to use short form of words.
More likely to say 'insects' than 'bugs', or something more dismissive.

He also doesn't always make use of contractions.

So he ends up sounding like a lot of other characters rather than General Grevious.

The British sounding dialogue doesn't help.

Good stuff.

Nice work. Now kill some Jedi please?

Very nice work. Odd layout for the chapter but it lent itself well to the whole action theme. All in all I enjoyed it thoroughly.

This is a great story! I love the way the characters are developing, but I feel the whole SJW thing is being pushed a bit too hard. It can especially affect the romantics of a story. Nobody likes an unassertive man. Why do you think that stories such as Twilight, Beauty and the Beast, and your story (to an extent) are so popular?

It’s a good story with great character development, but I would stay away from SJW ideals. They can demasculinize a character and make an unrealistic relationship.

I’ve noticed this story hasn’t been updated for a while and I’m judt wondering if it’s discontinued.

I’ve just come to say how much I’ve loved it and that I read it all the time on repeat. The relationships, character development story, I loved it all very much. The trust and lovemaking between Grievous and Ventress is amazing. It’s all grandiose and spectacular.

This story is the only thing that helps me go on living

The narrative in this story you have given for both Asajj and Grievous is heartwarming, tragic, witty, realistic, and incredibly sexy all in one. I don’t know many PUBLISHER authors than can pull something off like this, but I find this story utterly phenomenal. What sounds like an unlikely relationship at first later become a complex, well-written tapestry or character chemistry and a deep, longing need for each other. I look forward to more.

This is a BEAUTIFUL story. I cannot phrase into words at how heartfelt and beautifully written this is. I look forward to more.

This story is SO good. So well written and incredible...please, please continue.

I wish I could adopt the gunners! I really like them..they're well written and i care for them.

Have Grievous top Ventress! This story is amazing!'n

NO PEACE WITHOUT JUSTICE!

This is pure awesomeness.