Hey man awesome story so far. One of the best iv read so far and most emotional iv ever read( I literally did cry a few times reading the chapters) please continue this for this is one of my favorite fan fics I have read. Love the emotion put in it and the raw feelings that Ruby and Weiss have to themselves and towards each other. Hopefully we can get another chapter soon and awesome job. Keep up the great work!

is this still goin on

Wow, dropping a huge emotional bombshell there, aren't you Weiss? I love the connection you gave Ruby and Weiss here. Like, they're friends now and totally support each other, but at the same time they're not perfect. I know you haven't updated in nearly a year and life really does get in the way, but I hope to see more.

I see you haven't updated since January and that saddens me, because I just read all six chapters in one sitting, and I desperately need more.

Don't get me wrong though, I completely understand life always getting in the way, but please try and update soon? :)

~SnZ

"JUST KISS ALREADY"... i yell from another room maybe or maybe not snooping.

Of course its a bad time. Are you really that clueless?

Wow. You didn't update this story for quite a while. I found this from your other story "Of Thieves and Beggars." Just finished the previous chapter yesterday night. And today you updated! Anyways, this chapters has some pretty intense moments. When Weiss and Ruby yelled at each other near the end, I cried. It was just so sad, the feelings, the emotions both of them had felt. Man. Phenomenal job!

Good chapter with strong character dynamics. I like the dialogue as well. Good focus as well. Nice intervention from Ozpin too.

Well it's January 2015. Don't know if you're continuing, but I followed it in case you will. Just here to say that I love this story. Your writing is nicely done. Great ideas. A great writer overall!

Ooh, I like this story. Not sure how it's managed to slip me by so far, but glad I managed to catch it :)
Looking forward to reading more of this, keep up the good work. Also, loved seeing Cardin getting beaten up so handily by Weiss. Very satisfying.
All the best
Adam

You should really continue this there is so much potential and this could easily be one of the top RWBY fics if continued

Nice piece of fluff, but I guess you quit writing fanfic?

OMG why?! another fic killed...

the one guy

Hi! I appreciate you taking your time for the feedback. Yes, I do admit from a third person perspective that the concept that I introduced in this chapter is quite sudden, and I completely understand where you're coming from as to why you feel this way. I actually thought about the placement of this chapter as the sixth installment for nearly an hour before making the decision to implement it in where I did.

However, I think its important that I say this now: My ultimate goal for this story is to have a greater plot than a simple fanfiction that ships two characters together. A lot of fanfictions with shipping as its primary focus start off superbly, but end up falling off due to a declining plot, and its frustrating to both the readers and the writers whenever this sort of situation occurs.. When I first started the brainstorming of this story, I already had a general idea of my first major plot line within the story, and that went beyond the shipping of Ruby and Weiss. While the romance part of this story is definitely a driving focus, keep in mind that it's not the sole drive for the story.

Ah, but I think I'm rambling on a bit much here. The bottom line is, while yes, I agree that this introduction of "ultimate evil" could most definitely be considered a very sudden addition to the story, think of it more as a short intro to something most definitely awesome that I promise that you'll enjoy. I guess my biggest problem as a writer is having too grand of visions for the plot, but not as great of a transition to those visions as I would like to have.

But again, thanks for the feedback! As a writer, every review I get serves as a new opportunity to learn to write better as well as see things from the perspective of a reader.

(Also, while I'm here, might as well say thanks to everyone else that post supportive reviews :3 [I'm looking at you, metimesthree])

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Wow. That was deep. Awesome.