I have only one question, "Why?" Why flew to the Citadel? Why did they declare war on the batars? Check who has the most dick? They have preparations for a war with the reapers, you need to sit quietly and build ships. They had to remove the relay into their space. Nahrena is that?

This is awesome! Please continue.

the spending budget should be much higher, not 90 million a year. The United States alone spends something like 400 billion a year on military.

russia isn't nato's equal hell their not even America's equal since the cold war. If you said Russia and china that might be more believable. Just felt that needed to be said.

Well I've enjoyed this story thus far. I hope you continue it.

A few misspellings here and there. And I really wish the A/N comments would not appear throughout the story. It disrupts the flow and progression. Just put whatever you need to point out at the beginning or end please.

I don't have much of an opinion on the story itself yet.

Another queen to the fray.

Anti-council sentiment Eh? xD

A little short but awesome :D

Both sixth? Could it be that the Batarian fleet is also a number six?!

Un héroe.

Again.

Wouldn't their military be orders of magnitude bigger than stated? Or is it misdirection?

Obviously no blood will flow, they are human and abhuman strains xD

Huh, I had a similar idea for inteligence organization.