I love Spider-man's cheerfulness clashing against Harry's hostility.

The whole conversation between these two was genuine. Poor Spidey tries to show his support only to be rebuked by his ignorant friend. I'm glad there was a happy ending for them.

I liked the atmosphere you created. You had a nice writing style. I noticed one missing quotation mark ending towards the middle. But the overall narration had a good flow. This whole story holds up well as a one shot. Terrific plot overall.

Thanks for the great read!

He knows. Harry has to know, and I'm surprised he's not pissed.

That was Awsome!:)

Aww, that was so cute! I love this, that was good.

Nice. :)

Great story!

Yay, happy ending.

Lovin' your story bra'h.

It would be awesome if you made another chapter. That would be nice.

That was sweet. Peter & Harry are my brotp!

Bros forever.

Dude, u actually did a pretty good job with this story. I think ur writing ability's amazing.

In my opinion, I don't think Harry would actually HATE Spider-Man; I mean, he did manage 2 save his dad the 1st few times b4 the feeling of hate grew in... but that's just me. I c it more as a feeling of anger towards what happened, rather than actual hate (which has yet 2 happen). Bsides, if he DID hate Spider-Man, he could've acted like J. Jonah Jameson. -_-