I love this story. It’s a guilty pleasure to read Natsu and Lucy so unabashedly possessive of each other. Lucy is a hot mess but considering the background you have her, it works. Natsu is jealous, why do I love that so much?

I hope that you finish this one day! Thanks for the wonderful ride!

sis...this some good stuff u producing ️️

Omg! I freaking love this story! I love everything about it! I hope to see what is going to happen further in the story because omg I truly love it! Amazing story!

Omg! Great story! Can’t wait to see what happens next!

OOH LUCY BE A YANDERE LIKE NO TOMORROW

its been more than a year now bro plz update if you can

I think this is a nice story so far, but the only problem is that the characters aren’t realistic. I mean, come on now. If Natsu is a mafia leader, and he sends Lucy and the gang out to get information from ANOTHER mafia leader, then it would NOT take only a group of people, who have only been in a GANG, to defeat the whole mafia. That’s just unrealistic, and yet you make them seem invincible. And why is Lucy so.. Sadistic all of a sudden? Why do you write her as invincible and badass one moment, and then all talk and scared when it comes to Natsu? What is up with this picture? There were times where I wondered why so many people liked this, because the characters are so wushu washy it’s ridiculous

holy moly i love this! please come back this is amazing

OMGG I MISS THIS STORY .. PLS UPDATE AGAINNNN PLS

Please come back soon! This is the best fanfic I’ve ever read! I have so much love for this!

Hey I used to write fan fiction and I come back every so often so I know what it's like but if you ever do get round to it please finish this. Its brilliant. I used to read this as you published it back when I used to write.

Lots of love,
From your dearest Yui!

Hey! I love this story please update soon, if you need any ideas I have some. I guess I’ll just tell you now
So in the next chapter Natsu and Lucy end up fighting with Igneel, but when Natsu goes to kill Lucy he can’t do it so he hands the gun to Lucy and askes her to do it, Lucy doesn’t know what to say to Natsu asking. Lucy askes if he is sure he doesn’t wanna kill Igneel.
Sorry if I have really bad grammar, but keep up on the amazing work with this story!
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Omg I love this! Took me a few days but I’m up to date! Hope you can update soon! Can’t wait to see what happens :)

Amazing work I mean like wow. You've got talent girl

Alright well time's up, where's that annual update?