Just discovered your writing. They’re really good. Would love to see a sequel to this story. Or any of your stories for that matter.

I love this Deeks! Would like to see a sequel if you’re still writing fanfic.

I've enjoyed this journey Tess. The Commander got his kiss to keep her thinking when he got home. I've read a lot of fan fictions, but this piece of work was excellent. Thank you Tess.

Deeks sure had his way with Lenny Lin. He sure is as good as the NCIS agents when it comes to interrogation. So the Commander has a date with Agent Blye. That should be interesting.

If the guys at NCIS aren't impressed with Deeks now they sure should be. I know I am and most of all I think Kensi is too although the writer hasn't given me any indication that these two will ever be a couple. I'm remembering it's supposed to AU.

As many times Kensi has tried to bug Deeks this Commander is much smarter than anyone at NCIS except maybe Hetti.

I'm reading this for the second time and honestly I don't remember this story. I was surprised at the meeting with Kensi there wasn't more of a spark, but this is AU so maybe something will happen in later chapters.

Is there gonna be a sequel where kensi opens up to deeks about her past coz id love that

This is one of the best fics I've read in awhile, but it's from the pen of my favorite writer. I will miss you on wikideeks and hopefully you will continue here.

So kensi is a bitch who stalks deeks like some freak and treats him like crap instend of dping her damn job sounds about right

I would love to read a sequel and to learn if Hetty managed to get Deeks for her Team or not?
Good story. I loved to read it.

Regards
Lunary

I've just read this for the umpteenth time, and realized that I have yet to place a review.
I absolutely adore any story, where we get to see not only competent Deeks, but see him in a different job than being a detective.
Incredibly well done and written, the story flows nicely and I love how cocky and confident you portrayed the commander, especially out-maneuvering the agents in chapter 2.

See now, compared with Sentient, I would not have described this story as "Unbelievable AU." Glad I finally got past that and read it. Thanks for another well-written, entertaining, and in-character (despite career choices) story!

The sinking feeling in my stomach when I realize I just finished the last Tess diCorsi story I had not read yet, and now all I can do is anxiously wait for new chapters of running stories or reread completed ones...
Love the abundance of competent Deeks dialogue/monologue, the well written and well rounded storylines in general and cases in particular, and looking forward to (and hoping for) many more in the future. Thank you!

Great story. Hope you go back to these characters. There is definitely more story to tell