| Reviews for Whitebeards Siren (Rewrite) |
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   Asuka1920 chapter 68 . 8/4/2018 Loved reading this story! Can’t wait to read more! |
| Roxie14 chapter 65 . 10/6/2017 Please update it's almost every been a year since you update your story |
| Serius2812 chapter 9 . 8/9/2017 Hey, I am only at chapter 9 right now so I have no klue what you is comming but I hope she some how ends up with the fire cristal as heart. Maby she finds it in a near death situation and does not care what happens as long as she get the power to along side ace and marco who are in danger at that moment. Since for ice you used pain and hate, maby the cristal shanges the users character depending on the type of emotion was strongest, in this case passion. Wich woulnd shange her that much because she already feels strong about the whitebeards but after the she gains the cristal go batshit crazy if some one touches the whitebeards and it will be hard to contain her anger and dealing with that anger is her next chalange. I hope you will see this and maybe think about it. Anyway I love your story so far and am looking forward to see where you are going to take this. |
| Guest666-69 chapter 67 . 1/26/2017 I don't care for the AcexMarco but I like this story. And even though this is a 'T', I was really hoping for steamy sex scenes including Megumi with both or one or the other. If you don't mind me asking, would you please consider writing a sister fanfic for this but focus only on the sex scenes of Ace, Megumi & Marco? Like perhaps of everytime they do it? O.o |
| Roxie14 chapter 68 . 12/12/2016 This is an idea I just came up with but what if you made a side story where megumi went with ace to go after teach and not stay on the ship with Marco |
| AndurilofTolkien chapter 11 . 12/2/2016 love this |
| Kylnee chapter 68 . 11/20/2016 Understandable, this story has amazing length and great plot (and that 'plot') with events that don't completely rely on the actual anime or manga. You've done great so far~~! We can wait till you think of something and probably give any ideas that come to our minds and stuff. Ignore those flamers cause no one gives a damn about them! And if you have time and come up with anything, write a one shot like 'Pineapple Scented' for the lolz :3 GL~ |
| Roxie14 chapter 66 . 11/20/2016 Please update |
| Roxie14 chapter 67 . 8/26/2016 When will the next update be? |
| rodina.ashraf1 chapter 66 . 8/17/2016 Wow! That is amazing! Everything is detailed and AWWSOME! please continue to update this story! i love it ... |
| AndurilofTolkien chapter 1 . 7/10/2016 love |
| kaguya chapter 66 . 6/18/2016 Omg you used the idea I have about ace possibly being a celestial dragon! Is sooo happy! |
| AndurilofTolkien chapter 70 . 5/30/2016 great ch |
| Roxie14 chapter 69 . 5/19/2016 When will the next update be? |
| GajeelIronSteel chapter 49 . 3/15/2016 What happened other pet polar bear? |
