Wow. How many sappy stories can you think of?

Just when I thought the sisters were going to connect again, Elsa forces it to a halt before any progress could be made. Such an enjoyable short story with an emotional ending!

This is an interesting idea. The story is well-written and you did a good job at making me feel for Elsa and Anna and sympathize with them. I did see a few typos, but other than that this was a very good story and I hope you write more. Keep up the good work!