I kneeeeew he was a ghost but still it hurtsss so darn much. Whyyyyy

Wow, I sure as hell wasn't expecting that!
Amazing, and yet so, so sad too.
Your ideas for one-shots don't cease to amaze me.
Keep going! :)

It hurts... It hurts so much. Why are you such an amazing writer? ;-; OH MY RITSU... *sobs* I CANT DO THIS ANYMORE...

What a heart wrenching plot twist, I couldn't stop crying at the end and the beautiful thing about it is that I never saw I coming. Which is what I look forward to most when I read a story on here or in a book.

Please keep up the excellent writing.

Creepy ending...no happy ever after:-( anyways, its a nice story

This story...Oh god this story was just so sad. I was wondering where you were going with the story in the beginning but I really never expected that to happen...

Your stories always make me cry, and stories that make me cry, I know are written EXTREMELY well. Keep on writing! I can't wait to read more of your work! :)

I'm now very sad. But I'm glad I read it :) update soon!

I love all your stories...i've read all of them...i really like it...but i hate the feeling that clutched my heart after i finished them! T_T It's soooo bittersweet...well, whatever, that just show how good u're in writing...so keep writing!oh god, i felt like crying right now and i hate crying!

Omg. This is simply so great. It's also a bit simular to something i've been thinking about for a long time, so it was really enjoyable and helpful. I just love your one-shots 3. And this one is soo awesome.

OMG. So you're stories...you always get me...

Your imagination is incredible. I would've never thought to write that type of story for this pairing...

When I first saw you posted this story, I had to set aside a specific time I was going to read it, knowing that when I read your stories it will take us readers from reality and on a emotional rollercoaster and leaves us thinking for hours, sometimes days to come. At the end or just period, It's like "What the hell?" But in a good way I guess...

Your stories are always so intriguing and leaves me thinking about them even five hours after reading them, especially your one shots.

You have a great talent on your hands and an incredible mind and imagination, and don't EVER let anyone else tell you otherwise.

I'm looking for to what next adventure you have for this pairing. A multi-chapter story? Maybe? Please? I would love to read it and get sucked from reality with every new chapter. Then once it's done, read it all over again.

Well...I'll see you on your next update...or post...

It's true that death almost always comes to one partner first and leaves the other behind. I always admired my grandmother for things like that, and I think you expressed that feeling very well.

Queenie

Kind of freaked me out! But, as always, you get to make me ponder things, think things through. You're making me fall in love with you like this.
Good job!