Hope to read more soon.

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Sis

To me, Paul looks like Eddie Spears.

OMFG GREAT STORY! LOVE IT PLEASE CONTINUE

I hope you update soon I’ve been following your story since you posted it

I'm so sad you haven't updated this story yet!
Your writing is amazing, hopefully someday you'll log back on and finish this! till then I'll be crying in a corner!

HI! so i wanted to let you know that your story is amazing I'm in love please continue and write more!

I think I love you... please update soon I was up all night reading you're story. I'm head over heels in love with your writing style and basically your mind. This is everything I've ever wanted in a story! I'm so excited for this next chapter! XOXO

Loving this story! I can’t wait for figure out exactly what Red is!i really hope they tell her the secret soon. I hate when they put it off this long she’s gonna be upset when she finds out. Update Soon!

That was awesome! Can't wait for more! Update soon! And happy new year! :D

Oh my god yes! 1000% yess! I’m so glad you kept writing this story and I hope that you do keep writing this story. If everyone else is as logical as I am then the only thing to do next is a sequel! Now I know you have other fans but if I’m right I sent you this love and motivation as guest reviewer 188

Woah

I just read this whole thing and it is honestly one of my favourite stories! The idea is incredible! Please keep it up and write more soon! Xx

Well that was... unexpected! Love the new development! Poor Paul! My heart just broke for him! Really looking forward for more! Update soon! :D

AN UPDATE! AWESOME! Great chapter! Loved it! Can't wait for more! Update soon! :D

I love this, this is amazing.