I'm glad to see that the passages are nicely organized by now, it makes the flow of reading really a lot better, props to that Although I don't quite see why Miss disposed everyone again, the colourful bunch is so funny to go along with :c But I assume the reasons are legit and maybe'll stretch further. AND a surprise appearance of Yorick!:D Or I assume it's Yorick at least, I don't think any of his relatives are still alive...
Keep it up I'd say

ADamnGoodName

Just started reading and so far it is really good, but, chapter three seems a bit messy. Previous chapters were written well but three just seems hard to follow what is happening and is confusing. Might want to think about rewriting it for clarity.

Well, since you mentioned you are quite lazy concerning grammar, I won't start to annoy you with some mistakes that frequently return, but there are two things that annoy me though xd Yasuo* and Katarina*, I'm a grammar nazi when it comes down to names xd
For the rest, the story keeps on going pretty nice, although it feels there are some holes here and there for some reason, but whatever:D I'll keep an eye out, keep it up

Love it! Keep writing! Quinn x talon!

lol yeah rewriting the lores will f*** things up as we know them now :(

P.S.S.S I think that this is Yasuo P.S.S.S.S Your choice to make YASUO stupid or not , your choice son...

I don't understand why i necer reviewed this before... Meh... I'm lazy sometimes xD, well about your story, it's great and interesting, but in some parts it looks a little disorganized, maybe you should do more space between different dioligues. PS: hope to see a new chapter soon