Just one word, AMAZINGLY AMAZING!

THANK YOU SOO MUCH FOR THAT WONDERFUL STORY! :))

O loved it keep going you write like a profesianal

The best story I have read so far good job

Also if you're majesty would be ever so kind to grace us with a sequel that'd be real cool. Great story once again

I honestly think you're goal in life is to make people cry: joy, pain, sadness, over excitement, I don't think it matters to you. Not that I've ever cried, I just always happen to have something in my eye when I'm reading your writing.

I just recently finished reading this story and I've gotta say I absolutely love it. As a big Percabeth shipper, this story filled me with a lot of warmth at all the cute relationship moments. Loved seeing their relationship develop. Then when things took a turn for the dramatic, I felt the suspense. Those scenes with the criminal were genuinely intense. Not sure if I was dim or not but I didn't immediately get the "Stella's parents were criminals" connected to "Stella constantly getting kidnapped" until much later. Some of the chapters were short so I breezed through this story quickly. But that is a huge compliment cause I wanted to read more of this. Definitely gonna check out more of your stories.

Also, don't be too hard on yourself for not updating. As long as you complete your story, I've got nothing to worry about. Especially if the story's as good as this one.

One of the best ones ive ever read. Honestly! It ha da GREAT ending and a perfect mixturebof fluff amd plot. Be proud!

That's it ... your dead

Don't let her , don't let her , don't let her go, d-dont let her go don't let her go!

THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL OMG

This is perfect! I'm so emotional right now! Crying so much It's absolutely perfect. Just perfect.

Firstly, This is OOC. Madly, Annabeth is not shy.

Secondly, Don't get straight to the point, try to build up some tension between the two.

Eeeeeeeeeeek! This was a great chapter!

Awwwwww! I like how you portray Percy's thoughts!