Reviews for Knights in Bloodied Armor (Permanent Hiatus)
Skirret chapter 2 . 8/9/2016
Seems a little outta character and slightly one-sided; I'd think they'd be more equally aggravating with each other in a game of one upmanship. I mean Ciel wouldn't be completely overpowered by Integra in information.
deadlilli chapter 2 . 5/2/2016
dslkhbfkjsfbkhvdb. write more. or else. persons will come to haunt you in your sleep.
Supreme Gamer chapter 2 . 1/18/2016
GODDAMMIT, MAN, WHY DON'T YOU UPDATE THIS STORY. ALL THIS HYPE IS DRIVING ME MAD.
scrum chapter 2 . 7/26/2015
oh my gosh...this is most INTERESTING! please continue updating~~
itachisdbzgurl chapter 2 . 6/27/2015
I forgot about this, but please update sooner! I really do enjoy this story and now I remember it again it will be torture waiting another year
knobrien21 chapter 2 . 6/27/2015
I love it! Sebastian vs Alucard )
funnylittlestory chapter 2 . 6/27/2015
You got Alucard down perfectly. Can't wait for another update :)
Guest chapter 1 . 6/26/2015
Awesome can't wait for the next chapter
juliettacapuleto21 chapter 1 . 6/24/2015
Great!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
Cool can't wait till alucard comes in plz update soon
itachisdbzgurl chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
Loving it, please update quickly
funnylittlestory chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
That was a great start I hope you keep it up :)
Paxloria chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
Nice chapter!

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I'm curious as to what sort of AU this story is set in, since its advanced enough for movies, but horse carriges are stillused for tranportation.

I noticed a few small errors though:
In the Queens letter at the start of the chapter, you'll want to change "aprentices" into "subjects"
"physce'" is a word I'm SURE hasbeen misspelled.
I spoted 1 misspelling of Ciel's name.
"eye" instead of "eyes" since Ciel has an eye-patch.
"air" instead of "heir"
"what it is" instead of "what is it"
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Hope you can post more soon.
I'm kinda wonderiing if Ciel is to have Sebastian answer for him, if he'll instently believe, or if he'll start off doubting and then mentally cursing his demon for not educating him about other supernatural creatures years earlier.