please update!

I wept at this.
I then wept again at it being unfinished.
Will I have to weep again at it never being redone? I hope not.
Linda

Hi!

I see that it has been a long while since your A/N and apparently even longer sin your last actual update, so in the hopes that you still receive this or log in every once in a while, I do want to let you know a few bullet points of my perception of this fic of yours...

*I almost did not continue after chapter 35. I was pissed at you for doing that. Then, a couple of days later I was calm enough to continue on to 36... and I was still mad, but kept going. And what a wierd surprise the way you handled it. I thought rationally there was no way it was a permanent thing, but I thought more along the lines of Luna going now to Him. So... good job!

* I love how you incoporated Xena (one of my favorite lifetime shows) and the way you blended them into the Potterverse with they past intact is so cool!

*Also on this blending of fandoms, could have used a little bit more of Sabrina being around. Though that is a matter of personal longing.

*Following this train of thought, the Sakura Card Captor (though maybe it is Tsubasa Chronicle since it makes I think a little more sense) is also cool. A little sad that there was no more or real help from Syoaran for 'Maya' though.

*Which is another thing. I was slreally wierded out at the begining of this whole Maya nickname, did not really make sense... then it started to do make sense. Slowly but surely. Also, great job there.

*Cruciating Harry was interesting. And him coming back was expected but slow, got frustrated by that. Probably what you were aiming for, though.

*Sony being now the more open of the Potter house even with Harry's memories back,, is troublesome. I am intrigued.

*ok. On this. Totally hating the 180 you did on the adult Potters towards Hermione. Still curious as to the actual reason behind it.

*loved the guts Hermione had when returning the bracelet to Lady Potter. That whole 'scene' is just awesome.

*now... hands down, this was painting to be the best time travel fic I've ever read in any fandom, but since it is not quite over yet, and I don't know what is the ending you have had pictured for it, I can't really say if it is yet the best (for me) or not.
I do however can say that this is the second best still ongoing fics pairing Luna/Hermione that I've come across with.
And totally on my top 3 HP fics... and surely on the top 25 of all fandoms (even when not finished yet... I reckon if/when finished it will go higher on my ranking) so I do thank you for that.

Ok. So hope you're doing fine.

HEALER

It’s great!
I’m intrigued where’s Sony?
Please update

Please please author please keep updating this story of yours , it would really break my heart if you wouldn't keep updating this story such a wonderful though, so please please author I'm begging you please keep updating this story.

Love it! I hope you will post soon

I just gotta ask: what the heck kinda name is "Sony"? I can't help but think of the company every time I read it.

Tu historia es genial la empece a leer y no pude parar.
: )

Perhaps, what you should do is make it so that when Hermione comes back, she has NO memories and NO knowledge of her previous life, and has to re-learn and re-discover everything all over again at the very beginning of this story that your revising. But also have it where Hermione goes to either Ravenclaw, or to Hufflepuff when it comes time for her to attend Hogwarts again.

Just a thought.

Oh, and if you're going to have Hermione be adopted by the Potters again, then have it happen a few years earlier, so that she becomes a bit more acquainted and comfortable around them, and they with her.

Again… just a thought.

Ree

I look forward to the updated version then! I love this fic and I really want to see it to completion )

I understand that you’ve grown as writer, and hence, want your work to better reflect that, however I thought this book was truly fantastic. To be quite honest, I haven’t particularly found very many books that were this good, this long, and this developed while also having Hermione label herself as something other than straight. Quite a few of the gxg hermione fics I’ve read we’re incredibly disappointing, and this was very refreshing. I would love to see how you continue with this, so perhaps you could post what chapters you previously did, and keep this fic up and then post the new one under a different book so that we’d still be able to enjoy this one? That way you could also just put a warning at the top of the first chapter or in the summary saying that this was the old version and you have another version under your profile that you think is a lot better? I don’t know, it’s just a suggestion merely because I loved this book so much and I’ll probably go back and reread it later if it’s still up. Anyways, thank you so much for this wonderful book, and I can’t wait to see your new version!

Sir or Madam,

What you have written here, while unfinished, is quite breathtaking. I am no English major or anything, but even I found the many typos somewhat distracting to deal with, but only because of how good the content is. While you do somewhat belabor a few points, I must say that your characters are wonderful to behold. Watching these broken people work through such a hellish story was as delicious as it was emotionally difficult. I enjoy that instead of assuming that the "Light Bigots" were written to be flat and simple plot levers, I instead defaulted to thinking that something larger was at play. Though I never found out how right or wrong I may have been, it was a joy to read. Even if you do not continue this story, I implore you to keep practicing your skill at writing as I think you have a talent for it. Thank you for the read.

Sincerely,
Biff Alexander

I love this story and I hope you post it again!

Hello again. If you're planning on completely rewriting this, but keeping the main story pretty much the same as is (concerning Hermione's time-traveling into the past, back into her younger self), then might I suggest just as a thought, that you make it so that Hermione has to grow up all over again, accept with none of her memories, knowledge, etc intact. Basically, a fresh start to her tale. Again, purely just a minor thought I had which you do not need to implement if that's not the direction you're planning on taking with this story.