ugh, my chest hurts now. I honestly didn't expect to feel such sadness offer this.

;-; wow, I just ... wow. can't IMAGINE what tony was feeling/going through 'cause THINK about it. how would YOU feel if you had to WIPE a HUGE portion of your child's memory while listening to them begging you NOT TO. T-T *huggles heartbroken tony... and confused and frightened jarvis* the first time I read this half way through I was shaking with fear thinking "TONY CAN'T FIGHT JARVIS! IT'S *JARVIS* ToT" lovely job writing this. hope everything works out for both the heartbroken parent tony and the confused son jarvis. :)

i've only skimmed the story, and will leave a more detailed review later under guest under the name: "icecatfire again" but from what i skimmed it was good.. if not depressing. :)

I will not cry. I will ignore the burning sensation in my eyes, the tightening in my throat and the fact that my lip is quivering and my chin is all wrinkly.
Tony, baby... He had to kill J.A.R.V.I.S...(a section of him, anyway, but it's the same thing...) That's like killing your best friend/kid/confidante...(they have a complicated relationship, don't know how exactly to describe it...) Damn. Well, unless I'm drastically misreading this, J doesn't seem to remember, so that's a small consolation... I mean, God, the poor thing meant well... Heartbreaking as this is (I mean, holy hell, he killed J...) I still love it. Just...damn. (Pardon my French, but... This was powerful and I've been struck speechless, so I'm not very articulate...) Favoriting this, 'cause...wow.

Poor JARVIS :(
But your story is very good :)

THIS IS AWESOME! GENIUS PLOT!

Wow simply wow...this is exactly a kind of story that I like ... Simply took my breath away..
It was mysterious, logical, sensible, fanatical lolz
But really above all that it had strong emotional overtone from which I was blown away.
Jarvis Tony bond is to die for... Since you specialise in tony n bots bonding I was expecting more which u really delivered..
Waiting for more...Tc

The phone has the other J.A.R.V.I.S doesn't it? XD

Wow, that was intense. This completely drew me in, certainly your best one in a long time, and so deliciously lengthy. I read it twice just to get everything. I think you accomplished your goal of a mystery style piece quite well.

JARVIS was just heartbreaking... 'Did it not perform to your expectations?' :'( What was he going to say at the end, with that last "Sir"? And did JARVIS really troll that Mercedes-Benz driver like Fury said?

Oh and Dummy, You and the Captain where completely adorable, the way you wrote it out that scene felt real somehow. I'm very pleased how you did Steve, you kept him a really swell guy :3

Seriously you are like an amazing JARVIS and Tony writing MACHINE o.O

Btw, i noticed you added about 1,000 words to the story since I got the alert, where was that?