I just finished this story and I have to say it’s one of the best ones that I have read in a while. It seems like the story is dead now which is a shame but I’ll be following anyway just in case you decide to come back to it at some point. Seriously though amazing work man.

This is a very interesting story so far and I would really like to see it continue to sometime in the future.

This is an OK story. After reading all of it I can say that the positives in character interaction and new developments outweigh the negatives in character bashing and making folks look stupid. I mean the bashing wasn’t completely tasteful but some folks seem to at least contemplate their wrongdoing.

Great job please continue

Ya know, if it didn’t have so much bashing, this would have been really good. Like, really really good. Shame.

I dont really like it. Sorry.. in my opinion it is a bad AU..

Mito bashing Jiraiya omg

Oh crap I forgot about Itachi! Run boi run! He's going to kill you!

Eh... I was trying to give this a chance, despite the glaring holes I disagree with. I mean the amount of cliches that make this fanfic trash almost made me stopped reading it, but I thought... perhaps it gets better. And you proceed to make it even worse than it is. People still writing fanfics like this even after the Naruto manga is over with? lol who the fuck is this 'Naruto' in your story because that's nothing like the Naruto I know and yeah, this is fanfiction but even if you changed him a bit, it is still nothing like him. He's just becoming another Sasuke in your story, then have the gull to say shit to him. Also Naruto, execution? Sasuke. Bruh so ooc. That explanation for why he's feeling like that is weak as fuck. Bashing in a story usually means your fanfic going to suck. You should take this fanfic back to 2008 where this shit was prevalent. On the other hand I like the whole idea of it, the summary definitely drew me in but oh man. This writing is horrible! Hopefully you've improved since then.

Well...I was interested right up until you started needlessly bashing Kakashi.

Ohhh this is pretty fascinating.

Shika. Shika. Shika. Shika. For fcuk's sake that is so bloody irritating. Makes me skip whole conversations

By far one of the best stories i have ever read.

Next please

Mildly interesting, but IMO the focus is on the wrong characters.