Two things: One this story is awesome! Two a whole lot of it was in italics when I don't think you meant it to be because some of it was normal. Wonderful job!

The best thing about Eric is he’s not Edward also he’s really great smooth talker

loved it was a good story the only thing that got me was in one pov the story was one way but when you changed to another pov you changed the story to something different but i really loved the story and i hope you keep going

please please go through this...I like the story but the freaking grammar and spelling is driving me nuts

Edward is a idiot you don't leave your mate behind and expect to get her back when you have a mate you are mates for life

your story premise is great, but do you go through and read your chapters when you finish one? you need a pre-reader or a beta to correct all the mistakes that make it hard to read. it's difficult to get through some chapters because of all the mistakes. i will keep reading to see where this goes because i do love eric and want to see bella find happiness again.

Paul just imprinted on Mom, Paul just imprinted on Mom lol (sorry I was saying that in a sing song voice as I was reading it lol)

i don't really want to complain to much but the use of"&" n sentences instead of"and" is very distracting. the story premise is great, i love eric and bella stories! they are much more interesting together than eric and sookie or edward and bella. sookie does not deserve eric, always holding bill over his head after all the crap bill put her through. edward is the same way trying to control every aspect of her life. then again, bella runs to jacob way to much, goading edward into doing things he wouldn't do if she treated him with more respect.

Esme is savage! "No killing in my kitchen"?! That is perfect!

This is one of those stories that I would love to see hit the big screen.

So she is done with Edwards controlling issues, but what about Alice's?

Terrible. Your grammar made this unreadable.

This looks like a great story, by a dedicated writer with a gift but could you please do one thing for us poor readers? Could you copy and paste your story into Microsoft Word and "word replace" all the "&" symbols for the word "and" and it should switch out all of them instantly! Then just copy and paste you great story back in here and we can read it. I've tried to read it but the "&" sign symbols are reading "speed bumps" that cause us to get "kicked out" of the story flow every sentence. It's like trying to read and walk but tripping over a speed bump every 10 seconds. Thanks!

Excellent!

Love it badass Bella go