Wait she actually forgave her . . . ?
Way to ruin a perfectly good story. Fuck this Yang, she's a fucking psychopath and you say RED is the bad guy?
Forgiven without her even pretending to apologize or feel remorse for attempting to MURDER Red.
Is a new author writing these chapters, or . . . ?

Yang winning that fight and her actions in it honestly disgusts me.
And it also once again displays her canon norm of infinite speed and aura levels when the plot requires it.

I really hope Yang isn't forgiven any time soon. I know not to hope for her never to be forgiven, but I'll be disappointed if she is forgiven quickly, much less instantly.

. . . Weiss kept her there by magical plot armor powers? . . . You're trying too hard to return this to canon and I don't even understand why you want to.

Take them out from the inside, I guess?
Not buying it personally. Especially how fast they found her. Too forced imo.

Update please!

huh, character developmet for unlikely character

Hope you update this story again :)

Really great story hope to see an update one day

Best fanfic I've read. Period.
If you stop making this I will visit your home and point a gun at your 's THAT GOOD.

Wonderful story- However Ravens character comes out a little too cheerful- canonically she wants no ties with her child and her teammates (and child of one of them) other than that, Ozpin is a wizard. Literally.

Hey, I just gone done reading this from start to finish over the last 2 days, and I have to say that this is one of best fanfics I've read. I really enjoy the whole premise behind this story and while I totally understand the reason for you're hiatus, I hope that you return with more of it sometime soon. Sincerely, A fan.

Good

So a person from earth is trapped in Ruby's body. That's an interesting set up one that isn't very common.

I do like this Red aka Ruby Ooc