Haha YES! WE FINALLY GOT SOME SMUT, AWWWWW YEEEEA. HELLS YEAH, MAN. I'ma break it down for you, there's pretty much no such thing as bad smut so of course it was wonderful but you can actually write, so it was even more wonderful. I love the fact that Clare learned everything from fanfiction, I'm sure that hit close to home for a lot of people here. Anyways, glad we finally got our freak on, everything was perfect, now you need to go write some hot smutty stuff set in the Come What May universe. ...Maybe...but I also like Slare...but I love that Eli...I'm getting off topic, so overall, tis all good.

I got so excited to see you post this. I loved this oneshot alot and loved your story measure my endeavors. It is just how I imagined first time eclare sex. Great job.

OMG OMG YOU WROTE SEX YOU WROTE SEX WOO HOO THIS WAS AWESOME YEAY!

(Okay that is the most ridiculous review but yes, this universe totally needed the sexitimes and you brought it.)