Please update

Golly gosh you are a talented writer. Cannot wait for the next update.

I really like this and it is very good please update soon.

Please update soon! 3

Shipping... What about maria? It breaks canon!

How many shades of grey are there? 50 maybe?

ooooh tension is building up there! What will Selma do I wonder mmm?

Yay, finally another chapter to this amazing story :D Thank you so much for updating and I'll definitely stay alert for more Shades of Grey! xxx

Omg, this story is so amazing I can't even describe the awesomeness in one chapter each-
*Awed by the story.*
I can REALLY tell that you put so much thinking into one chapter and detail that it feels like we're in the story. That is what I really love about fics is because those extra words and care for a story really makes a difference to me when I read a story.
Bravo bravo my dear author!

The scene in the courtyard made me cringe as well. De Naplouse was deranged.
Selma is quite the guardian angel. If any weapons were missed in the game, it would have to be the crossbow and bow and arrow. Killing guards from long rang would have been fun and a good distraction to sneak past them.
I liked the end of the chapter; a very nice reunion indeed.

please update soon! i love this!

Seriousky itd obviously Selma. Duuuuh. Anyways please please pleeeeaaaaassseeee keep updatibg I'm so freaking hooked into the book. Im staying uo tillb1:30 trying to finish reading this. So please update soon. XD

Your story seems rather promising thus far, though admittedly, I'm only on the first chapter. You're not too wordy when describing things-a trait many fanfiction authors are guilty of. I do, however, have a few nitpicks.
When someone is being addressed, the statement being made and the aforementioned person's name must be separated by a comma. For example: "Why are they attacking us Altair?" should be "Why are they attacking us, Altair?" Or, "I don't know Little Falcon but your father wants you to come," should be "I don't know, Little Falcon, but your father wants you to come."
And try to show things rather than saying them flatly. By this, I mean that you should show the reader that Selma is intelligent and perceptive instead of say it outright.
Also, throwing out bits and pieces of characters' physical appearances rather than describing them all at once is always better.
And, on the note of character traits: I haven't seen any flaws Selma has. She's described as perceptive and smart and beautiful-all while she's only ten. Of course, this is only the first chapter, so I'm not certain if you elaborate later on.
In short, you're doing a rather nice job. Just a few things here and there could be changed. I'll be sure to finish reading what you've posted soon. Keep writing, and of course, do what you wish with my advice.

Altaïr is written perfectly. I wonder who is watching him as well. The flashbacks were also interesting. Nice that you remembered Adha.

Beautiful description; everything is lively and vivid in Damascus. I agree with Selma on so many points. It's nice that she is friends with Farid; his goal is quite noble and that he is teaching his soon to be wife how to read and write. Thumbs up for him.
I'm guessing Selma will encounter Altair soon; that'll be interesting to see and how their romance will start.
I love how we see Selma's thoughts; it helps for the reader to connect with her character.
I'm hoping we see more of these civilians like Azize; in the game it was a bit disappointing that we couldn't really interact with civilians.
Well written chapter and I can't wait for the next!

Ok,you updated!I already like you,but there seem to be tiny grammar mistakes on this chapter