HOLY gjfhfjhfjfkg WHAT!

Sorry I couldn't review sooner. I absolutely loved your story and it's on favorites. I remember when I first found it when you began this fic. I'm glad to have read it to the end.

So, it's finally over... where to start?
Good sides: Interactions well-built, characters are interesting (and no useless OC :) and not carbon-copy of one another, people actually have a character development (in this chapter particularly), happy ending for everyone, but not without some hurt, you always end chapters in a nice way ;).
Not-so-good sides: Pace sometimes a little slow, no need for extra chapters, as they could have fit very well in the main story, sometimes too much explanation of what's in the character's head (most of the time it's clear without writing it).
So, all in all, a good story, definitively had some fun reading it. Hope to see more from you in the future. Thank you and bye ;).

In love with the end of this chapter!

Awwwww this was so cute! Glad to get an insight of their relationship :3

...WHY DID YOU END IT SO SOON :(

Please make a direct sequel after you have completely finished this story, the extra's chapters included.

O_O

Only thing i can say is: WTFH and O_O

I have have a mind to murder you for making Demy straight :P :P :P

Sorry, but anytime i see Zexion and Demyx i immediately think they should be together.

Another great chapter.

I honestly MUST compliment you're portrayal of these characters.

YES, MORE RIKU, HUZZAH :P

Sorry, that's my inner Princess Luna kicking in.

Anyway you're writing style is GREAT, however i think you should often check it so you see typo's. And if there is a Point of View, make it obvious or a little easier to know who's point of view it is. Other than that, i cannot see any flaw what-so-ever.

I. LOVE. IT.

You're writing style is excellent. At the start i thought about putting my Review as a question if Cloud was Cloud Strife or someone else. I do love this story.

It was a nice chapter, I'm not a fan of extra chapters because I think it could have been inserted between the others 7 chapters, but that's not really a big deal. What matters most is that story-wise it fits perfectly in the main story, explaining nicely why Sora and Roxas didn't know who Axel's roommate was and managing to shed some light on Riku's and Axel's behaviors. What is a little bit too extreme, in my opinion, is that Axel being 20 and having never kissed anyone is a little bit unbelievable (especially because he affirmed to have had some relationships in the past), but I can see what you wanted to do and it all played nicely in the end. All in all a good chapter, I think you've improved a lot since the beginning of the story. Keep going on :)

I love you! this was so good! llove Akuroku and this was so sweet ! XD lol emo hot blondie! xD thank you for the extra!

Omg I wasn't even anticipating an extra chapter yet this was amazing :3 I loved it.

This was a great story. I really enjoyed it. I look forward to reading more of your stories.