This is a perfect story. Good plot. Well written. Perfectly paced and with depth. I have never read a better fan fiction piece

Wow. This story was completely amazing. So well written. So much angst but the little bro mos and family moments were so very nice. And including Bobby and Pastor Jim in there was so nice as well. I knew it couldn't all be hugs and puppies and happy endings, but I do like how you brought the story up to the Stanford era and season 1. Thanks for writing!

This was beautiful I'm in tears

Thanks for the ride, friend! MUCH appreciation for all the hard work you put into this great story. XOXO

You should do a sequel where Dean is dealing with sam leaving and sam is missing Dean. Btw this was really good

I can't even tell you how much I loved this story. It was amazing, from start to finish. I can honestly say that this was one of the best hospital stories that I've read (and I read a lot of them). I especially loved the realistic ending. John wouldn't change. He's too bullheaded and asshole-y. Thank you for writing this :)

Wonderful story. :)

Good chapter, good choice, hopefully good change for them.
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Ohh this was so perfect! !

You're a really good writer. Holy mahogany! I have never felt such anger, resentment, pure HATRED than when I hear child services speak.

I hate the government because they shit from us. They call it good intentions, but you know what they say about the path to hell. I hate people because if the government actually did tell the public shit they needed to know, then all they would fucking do is panic. Everyone knows panicking does jack squat, but they do it anyways. I hate humanity. I'd rather be a squirrel. Or a moose.

I hate Child Services. They ruin everything. I know ignorance is bliss, but it also breeds stupidity. Sometimes people deserve to be set on fire. I clap for your story. Brings out the feels in me.

Great chapter! I so wanted to thump a few of those CPS folks. Poor John, Dean & Sam. Thankfully Pastor Jim and Pastor (Lol) Singer were there and will continue to be :) Love the story!

I am really liking this story, there are a few things that I don't quite by (Sam was not allowed to go back to their motel room? Why not? He probably would have been asked to go get his and his brothers belongings and he could have left a note for John. Also, he would have send someone there the first night, I am sure that they are smart enough to have am address book with all the relevant numbers and Sam would have tried calling them all that night. You also mentioned that John went looking for the kids after school but didn't see them. But then, Sam came from the hospital from school. Though, Ok, he might have missed him, specially if he was looking for 2 boys instead of one) But overall , it is a great story

I love this! They need to stay with John. Even though I'm not a huge fan of John Winchester, I understand that he did what he could. Breaking apart the Winchesters is a bad plan on the doctors' parts. I cannot wait until the next chapter!