I love the morning quarrel.

I swear, this story is so beautiful.

Wow.
This fic...just pure...wow.
You're really ripping it. Looking forward to the next update.

This is a great story. I get really excited with each new update. The ending of chapter 12 reminds me of the opening monologue of Avatar: The Last Airbender.
"Long ago on Nowhere Islands there was peace and harmony until suddenly the pig masks attacked. Only the psychic master of PK Love could pull the seven needles and defeat them..."
But I digress, it is an amazing story and I happily await the next update. （）(Whew! That was long!)

"D...Dobby?"
Oh gods, I think I broke two of my ribs trying not to laugh out loud. It was quite some welcome humor after all that "Happy Box" fiasco. Then there's the "Hey, Toony, you're getting a free TV." Funniest chapter by far.

Again, I enjoyed the little convo between Ness and Red. They interact exactly as I imagine, and I think it makes sense for Red to read emotions and subtle behavior better than Ness. He is a pokemon trainer after all.

And seriously, dude, it's okay. Take your time with the story . :) It's probably small consolation, but I really do mean it when I hope that you feel better. Keep up the great work. :)

Ohh, i hope this updates soon!

Its nice to see that this fanfic is still updating!

Nice to see another chapter in a pretty good fic. Lately, the smash archive has kinda gone down the shitter. There's been nothing but shitty parody fics and more of those stupid fart fetish fics by that Yoshizilla rhedorus guy. It'd be nice if some of the writers here tried to actually make some quality fics instead of a bunch of stupid parodies.

I like the way you write. :) This story honestly deserves more reviews, so I'll be happy to add one in. ;D I'm no expert, but I'll do my best.

For dialogue, the way Lucas, Red, Ness, and Toon Link interact is interesting in the sense that any reader can gain an idea of each character's personality. It's crafted so naturally that I can easily imagine conversations like this happening in real life.

It's also a nice touch that all four of them don't immediately "click"; the tension resulting from Toon Link inadvertantly being compared to Young Link is understandable, along with Red's (slight?) jealousy of Ness over Lucas's friendship.

I'm REALLY hoping that Ness can bring Lucas to terms with Claus's death without much much hassle, but something tells me that it's not going to be as easy as it looks.

It's a shame to hear about those erased chapters (That sucks, I've been there before too D:), but when life throws you lemons, make lemonade. :) Whatever happens, I want to thank you for writing such a fic with your time. Keep it up!

Whhhoooaaa. . . . . . .

This writing is incredible. Nuff' said.

Yeah! I love this story, so I'm super excited that it's back. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
-Starryskys102

I EFFIN' LOVE THIS FIC! I wonder who the god like crearure is

This story is fantastic. While it does have a few typos here and there, it's very well-written, with very interesting characters. Mother 3 is one of my favourite games, and I've always enjoyed seeing stories that touch on the aftermath of the game, and the effect it could have on Lucas, especially in this situation, since he doesn't know if he actually managed to save his world or not.

I really hope this story does not fall into abandonment.

This was a really good chapter and I enjoyed reading it. The characters seem really believable in what they say. I will say that you have quite a bit of typos be careful with that. But it doesn't ruin the story so great job none the less and I hope to read more.

This is going great so far! I liked how this story includes point of view shifts like Ness and Toon Link getting along, as well as Red trying to deal with his roommate. Those were nice touches. Also, really nice ending for the latest chapter. Keep up the good work- You can do it I believe in you! (Muffled shouts of encouragment from the crowd cheering you on).