I like the ending never forget about a lost child. Really great story from an amazing author

This story is really great. Very realistic about the heartache miscarriage brings

great story some sad and some happy and funny you are a really good author. Side note I think you are right about people calling people who have a disability retarded the simple minded people who do that are the retarded ones. I have seen and know that they are smart and have skills like anyone else does. They are handicapped just like me. I was in an accident that changed my life severely because I hit my head on steel and now I am brain damaged. Before my accident my IQ was 151 photo graphic memory but that died in the accident. Even though I changed because of what happened to me and I damaged my head, I do not consider myself stupid or retarded I have things that I can still do. I am part of that group and the amazing things I have seen and know we are not STUPID or RETARDED! You are! The judgmental people who looks and sees how we are and thinks stupid or retarded they are the ones that are STUPID AND RETARDED

that was great I loved that Keith told Nanny about Allura's problem about the baby and I am glad that Nanny was able to help her

love the chapter. Love Keith telling her about Nanny's own miscarriage and telling Allura to talk to her about her own. I really liked was about Keith telling Allura about Keith and Nanny making Allura kept busy. I can just imagine how Allura would say that and her telling him to get Nanny to back off now that she knows what he did. I really can hear how she would sound and I starting laughing at what she said to Keith and his fault

My lord she is having a hard time dealing with the loss. I know how that is. I will never forget the loss of a child especially when you can't have more and put a smile on when all you want to do is sit down and die. It is very hard even now and it has been roughly 27 years and you don't forget. You live with the pain and I am very happy about how you are writing this story because it is very accurate. Very Good.

Wow what a chapter! I love your writing. Sad about Allura and how bad that she is grieving for her lost child. Hard times. I know that. Great writing!

What an excellent chapter! I really love your writing. This is great. I can't wait to find out what happens next Really great Loved Nanny and Koran's reactions and now planning of the wedding Nanny changed when she realized what Allura was going through and also what Keith was going through.

who was shocked who opened the door I can't wait to find out.

I am very sad that she lost the baby and I to understand what Allura is going through. Usually I would not read this story because of it being so much like I went through. I can't have children and I was a lot younger so my miscarriage ended that. I enjoy your writing so much that I will continue this story, but sad about it too! I hope for a good ending unlike mine.

Koran and Nanny need to know about the pregnancy now What is Allura waiting for? Her Guardians, the Voltron Force needs to be told and her people. How will everyone react? I can't wait to find out

awesome I love Keith's reaction to Allura telling him about her being pregnant with his baby

Wow that was a great chapter

I am really happy that you continued Dradin it was a really awesome story Allura pregnant this is going to be awesome I am sure

I'm so sorry for taking so long to finish reading your beautiful story. I struggled with writing this review as I was filled with so many emotions and wasn't sure how to convey my deepest and sincerest appreciation to you. You mentioned that this was a difficult story for you to write. Please know that it has certainly made a difference and I am personally grateful. In short, your story has helped me so very much. Thank you for finding the courage to write it as well as for sharing it. *hugs*