Reviews for Sweetwater Pioneers |
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Guest chapter 6 . 1/9/2019 Thank you for the amazing and exciting story so far. Hope you have a happy new year. |
Guest chapter 6 . 11/25/2015 Well... damn. Another interesting but dead story. |
Guest chapter 2 . 2/8/2015 Potatoe? Your main characters name is "Potatoe"? And you didn't even spell it right, which is "Potato"? |
Jinseino Lemon chapter 6 . 11/22/2014 Nice! I was wondering how you were going to handle translations from one language to another, especially Spanish to English, but that was great! Love the story. Keep it up! |
MasterXMaster chapter 6 . 11/17/2014 You can rely on the royal guards to royally screw up every time! Tension rises, I really like this fic. |
MasterXMaster chapter 5 . 11/17/2014 I really like your fic. I read all five chapters in one go (they are somewhat short) and I can tell you that I like the characters and the story. Good choice to plunge them into action from the beginning. Now I want to see how they manage to save the Players trapped into the cathedral. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
blueberries chapter 6 . 10/23/2014 Yo! Your story's just cool as it is... it's also exciting and unique i'm excited for the nxt chapter |
Lanari chapter 1 . 10/10/2014 This is a wonderful story! I didn't think I'd like a Log Horizon fic not set in Akihabara, but now I'll admit I want to do one of my own! :) But be careful; it looks like you're having trouble controlling so many characters at once. Perhaps you should take the time to choose one to focus on while you get your bearings of your new world. I look forward to reading more of this in the future |
dracos24 chapter 4 . 7/18/2014 Interesting story with unique characters so far, but it feels like you might be changing faces just a little too quickly for my taste. |