A very sweet and lovely story

Your story is amazing. It was so real and fitted the character. I wish I would have found it sooner. Please write more story.

This chapter was so perfect!

I realize that I am coming across your stories many years after they have been completed. But I wanted to let you know how hard I laughed when I read the part about Edward trying to imagine getting a mountain lion out of a vending machine. Not only are you a wonderful writer who deeply understands each character, you bring some wonderful and creative humor to your stories. I will also never be able to look at a vending machine quite the same way again. Thanks for that. LOL

Great story but Allice should have seen some vision of Bella

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Oh man! I did not see that coming. You do a really good job keeping the story real!

So sad, I'm tearing up

AHH! You had me thinking this would be easy for him! How he can stand the temptation is amazing

I am loving your Tale of the Years series. I just wish I started reading it in chronological order haha. Your attention to detail is amazing! The clinical and hemophilia as an excuse, you really thought this out.

I've read all of the Tale of Years up to this point. I'm sorry I haven't commented yet. I have enjoyed, or at least appreciated it all along the way. The way you filled in how Edward became the man he was when Bella finally came into his 'life' was amazingly done. The not-quite-canon things that occurred once in a while are either insignificant, or fill in some of the small inconsistencies in the canon. There are things all a long that I particularly like, but I think the diamond *spoiler* ;) that he eventually gave to Bella takes on a whole new meaning. That bracelet was one of my favorite things Bella was given.
I actually could have written a much simplified comment that says the same thing with only three words: I love it!

My favorite part

hey. i lovr this storh so i came back for a second reading. i was wondering if you're any closer to writing this "outtake" of edward ending up in Volterra if he had gone to the Artic to stave himself.
cheers!

OHHHHH MY GAAAAAAA XD
THAT LAST LINE THO
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT

I have been looking everywhere for a good Calgary scene, and I stumbled across the best one ever by accident in your fic! Drama, family bonding, even an awesome fight! Alice's vision seeing Jasper and Esme being attacked actually had me panicking! This is amazing, this whole entire story! Truly, you did such a genuinely great job I can barely express how fantastic this whole thing was! You clearly put so much time and effort into this series I'm in aw! Do I desperately wish you'd have continued and done the Twilight books in different points of view, yes, very, very, very, much so, but even the brief glimpse I got of this world through your eyes made my life!