Hello, I love your story, it's a pity that there is no more second reading, can I have a message if there is a sequel?

Noooooo! Bring them back to life! Pleaseeeee

this is so intense. If this was a cliffhanger and I didn't have another chapter after this, I think I would have died.

le gasp

OMG. I love this fic. It's been a while since I'v read a One Piece OC fic with a character that was both legitimately mysterious, badass, yet relatable without being over the top. ANd I absolutely adore the issues with gender and Sanji and Ace and..! hope you update soon!

Great chapter! Conis!

Awesome work on this chapter and man poor wiper

This fic is so amazing and although I got zero sleep last night, it was worth it because I had to finish the story. At the very beginning I was a bit wary with the concept, but I'm glad I kept reading because it has been worth it. I love the different ideas touched within this story and how all the characters have been written with more depth. Kelly's personality and and how they are presented is so charming and makes me love them. Reading this and seeing some chapters with their cliffhangers has made me feel so anxious for the characters and I loved it! I also loved how you added in the chapters where other characters showed how they viewed Kelly, and I especially enjoyed Zoro and Chopper's impressions the most. The recent appearance of Erin has been great and reading Sanji's internal struggle wih his ideas was interesting and I can't wait to see how this will effect his relationship with the girls around him. Speaking of his relationships, I have loved reading how his relationship with Ciel has changed from the very beginning. Is it bad that I enjoy their dynamic more than what is between Ace and Kelly? Though the relationship between Ace and Ciel has been a favorite of mine as well, especially with how compassionate Ace has been with Ciel. Seeing their journey has been great and I hope that I can see more of Kelly and your story. Thanks soooo much for writing this, this is such a great start to my summer.

i want you to know that i dreamed about this fic. it was weird

this is one of those fics that I get REALLY excited when I see updated. of course I enjoy all the fics I follow and favorite but this is one of those ones that I always remember what happened in the previous chapter, no matter how many fics I've read in between updates. I love Ciel's character and the mystery around her that she has with the strawhats. I'm hoping to see her really open up to them and learn to fully trust them. and I see you SANJI eyeing her((; can't wait to see how that develops as well(:

this is amzazing O.O Go Ciel! I think this is probably my favorite fanfiction because of how amazing Ciel is - all of her traits and characteristics and care for her familiars are so unbelievably admiring. I am amazed that you can write something like this! You're a great writer, and I wish you good luck in your next chapter (and whatever else you may be writing)!

After all this, it's nice to see our resident snakewoman magi finally showing her strength.

Well written, the emotional depth was quite nice without being overly angsty as it has been in the past. I especially liked Sanji's internal crisis...too bad it came before Ciel's gender was revealed, but that could turn out to be even nicer.

good work on this chapter and I also enjoyed seeing Sanji struggle with his morals

I am concerned as to what Kelly/Ciel is going to do now that Erin is back? Will she stay, will Erin go with her, will they part ways? Is Erin going to spill the beans on Ciel's secret? Also, if Ciel does make it and he absorbs the lightning, his clothes will be practically destroyed, right? Will the Strawhats see his scars? I have so many questions!? I can't wait for the next update! I love this fic so much! :D

Why, why must you always end with cliff-hangers? Now this is gonna be droning in my mind like a bad-well, good, I guess- headache. Shoot, though. Good job Kelly! Haha, kinda felt like she was bombing the island with pillar-power, it was pretty cool. AND I saw those mentions of Zoro there! "If the swordsman could take out the priest..." yeah, go Zoro!
Anyway, lovely chapter, again, and I didn't feel confused at any part. I think it actually flowed quite nicely. I look forward to the next update!