Would die for this story to be finished before fork witch worm!

It seems unlike Arya to burn trees under any circumstance. And again, how can Eragon return to Alagasia when the prospect was dismissed by him when he spoke to Nasuada last in book 4? I'm being harsh with the review because I like your work and want it to be better.

Ah, I am disappointed. You usually stay true to the books but here you show eragon returning to alagesia when it is stated very clearly in book 4 that Angela foretold he (Eragon) would never return. Explain yourself!

Your work does justice to the original books. I hope the rest of the chapters are as true to the books as this one and as detailed and grounded. Thank you for this.

This is an amazing piece and i can not wait to see how it ends. We will be waiting in anticipation for your next chapter. And i thank you for all the effort. No other dragon novel comes close to the eragon series. So i hope it never ends.

Just a hint, it's barzûl not brazul. Brazul sounds like a mispronunciation of Brazil or perhaps basil

I love how you sort of reunited Roran with Carn, even though it's not Carn, but son. Great work there, and very clever. I've only ever had praise for this book, and i hope it stays this way :)

amazing story, paulini himself would commend it and hope you continue

This is pretty suspenseful... I love it!

You are such an amazing writer. This should be published. I would gladly buy it.

Thank you for sharing your story with us so far

NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! He can't be be dead, right?

Aaaaaaaahhhhhh YES! Carn was awesome, I wish he hadn't died :(

This is so good it's been leaving me to wonder what's going to happen next. I love it.

I'm looking forward to it. I think this is a great story that doesn't rush the ExA.