Krogun (mass efect)equals klingeon (startreck)

so you are the last wizard in the galaxy because the rest has been hunted down by forces of evil, what do you do? scream out to the world i am the last wizard hire me so you can set up a nice ambush. and ofc waiting for ceberus to show up
besides inserting a wizard in ME to do the things with magic they did just fine without him, how then is he relevant.
btw impressive how much magic he knows from reading books, especialy knowing runes

ok this is all sorts of messed up, first the gods we have on earth are apparently the real ones compaired to the godess or spirits why do only the humans know of this? second he gets a second change because free will was subverted you mean as opposed to the 100s of cycles that came before were spieces were brain washed not to mention the leviathans that did it before that or the thorian? and it seems to me like something like the reapers might just nececitate the intervenience of an archangel no? lastly what is 1 unasuming man going to fix in the mass effect verse were war is about to start?

BROOOOOOOOOOO! WHERES THE UPDATE?! DONT MAKE ME BRING IN TERRY CRUISE! POOOOWEEEER!

ya got any more of dem updates?

man i love this story and i would love to se shepard and Mikhail to get hooked up you know

I don't often post reviews like this, but..
This chapter made me want to vomit. It was.. Both good and bad. I just hope there isn't anything like this later on, or else I'll have to drop this. It's good, but not good enough to handle that.. Feeling.

Why why just why oh and if you think by rape it means badly heat no it means rape were sex is forced apon you kinda rape what the neck man I mean really

im sorry, WHAT THE FUCK JUST HAPPENED. you not only had Sheppard raped repeatedly in a previous chapter and had Michael easily mind raped and forced to make a deal with the white court queen. But now you killed Tali, not only that but you had Michael condemned for saving the crews lives. Yeah I am done with your story, the moment you had Sheppard raped ruined this story, but everything else killed it.

Great story so far, keep it up!

This story is great but I have to ask, do you mean Manacle every time you type maniacal?

and i love seeing a character having a power trip.

This is truly a gift from God

I love Dresden inspired stories. This is a a good one.

Till the end of this chapter I couldn't tell if he even remembered the Mass Effect-verse.
Unless he either forgot about Geth/Nazara/Saren or his memories was messed with...